Aug. 8, 2021
Deng Xiaoping
The most important man in modern China history , Deng Xiaoping, had great difficulty in restoring US-China relationship. Following in Mao’s footsteps, he highly valued US-China relation. However he bursted with anger just several days before the announcement of US-China diplomatic establishment because the US side had mistakenly thought Deng had agreed an an important issue. The US had wanted to continue to sell weapons to Taiwan which was strongly opposed by Deng. Although Deng was very annoyed by this, he had to compromise because he need the American’s help to defend China against the Soviet Union and to open and reform China.
Deng Xiaoping
The most important man in modern Chinaese history , Deng Xiaoping, had great difficulty in restoring the US-China relationship.
Modern "Chinese" history: "China" is describing the noun ("history") so it needs to take the adjectival form ("Chinese")
Restoring "the" US-China relationship: an article is required before the noun
Following in Mao’s footsteps, he highly valued the US-China relationship.
an article is required before the noun
However he bursted with into anger just several days before the announcement of the establishment of US-China diplomatic establishmentrelations because the US side had mistakenly thought Deng had agreed an an important issue.
The past participle of "burst" is "burst" (and they are both pronounced the same, unlike the present and past of "read"). You can say "burst with", but I think the better choice of preposition is "burst into".
The US had wanted to continue to selling weapons to Taiwan which was strongly opposed by Deng.
Although Deng was very annoyed by this, he had to compromise because he needed the American’s to help to defend China against the Soviet Union and to open and reform China.
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This is a great effort. There are only some small mistakes in each sentence so I can see you are close to mastering English :) keep it up!
Aug. 8, 2021
Wow I am so glad to hear that
Thanks for your help, Smey.
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Following in Mao’s footsteps, he highly valued US-China relation. Following in Mao’s footsteps, he highly valued the US-China relationship. an article is required before the noun |
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However he bursted with anger just several days before the announcement of US-China diplomatic establishment because the US side had mistakenly thought Deng had agreed an an important issue. However he burst The past participle of "burst" is "burst" (and they are both pronounced the same, unlike the present and past of "read"). You can say "burst with", but I think the better choice of preposition is "burst into". |
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The most important man in modern China history , Deng Xiaoping, had great difficulty in restoring US-China relationship. The most important man in modern Chin Modern "Chinese" history: "China" is describing the noun ("history") so it needs to take the adjectival form ("Chinese") Restoring "the" US-China relationship: an article is required before the noun |
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The US had wanted to continue to sell weapons to Taiwan which was strongly opposed by Deng. The US |
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Although Deng was very annoyed by this, he had to compromise because he need the American’s help to defend the Soviet Union and to open and reform China. |
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Although Deng was very annoyed by this, he had to compromise because he need the American’s help to defend China against the Soviet Union and to open and reform China. Although Deng was very annoyed by this, he had to compromise because he needed the American |
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