July 24, 2025
Demon Slayer (129)
I might have written about Demon Slayer before, but I'd like to write about it again.
First, I started watching the anime Demon Slayer on Netflix about two years ago.
At the time, I wasn't into it at all, and when I watched until around episode 6, I asked my friend "When does the story get interesting?"
My friend said "If you haven't found it interesting, then it's just not for you."
So I dropped it.
However, around six months ago, I started watching it again because it's been really popular, it made me curious.
前に「鬼滅の刃」について書いたことがあったかもしれませんが、もう一度書きたいと思います。
一番最初に、二年くらい前に鬼滅の刃のアニメをネットフリックスで見始めました。
その時は全然はまらなくて、エピソード６くらいまで見て、友達に「この話はいつから面白くなるの？」と聞きました。
友達は「今面白いと思わないならそれは、あなたの好みじゃないんだよ」と言いました。
だから、そこでやめてしまいました。
でもずーっと人気なので気になって、6ヶ月くらい前、また見始めました。
Demon Slayer
I might have written about Demon Slayer before, but I'd like to write about it again.
First, I started watching the anime Demon Slayer on Netflix about two years ago.
At the time, I wasn't into it at all, and when. I watched until around episode 6, and I asked my friend "When does the story get interesting?"
My friend said "If you haven't found it interesting, then it's just not for you."
So I dropped it.
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It's a good series, but thankfully there are different stories to satisfy everyone. I usually give a show about 3 episodes before deciding if I'm going to give up on it. Hope you enjoy it this time around. If not, there's always Kaiju No8 ;)
July 25, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections! Now I'm completely hooked. I watched all Season two times^(^o^)
Demon Slayer
I might have written about Demon Slayer before, but I'd like to write about it again.
First, I started watching the anime Demon Slayer on Netflix about two years ago.
At the time, I wasn't into it at all, and when I watched until around episode 6, I asked my friend "When does the story get interesting?"
My friend said "If you haven't found it interesting, then it's just not for you."
So I dropped it.
However, around six months ago, I started watching it again because it's been really popular, it made me curious.
Feedback
Well done! I haven't watched the latest season of Demon Slayer, but I found it to be just so-so. Still, the quality of the animation is amazing!
July 24, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections! Now I completely hooked!
FI first, I started watching the anime Demon Slayer on Netflix about two years ago.
This "first," at the sentence leads people to expect you're going to enumerate points. It's sort of more like まず. Using first as an adverb is more like 初めて
At the time, I wasn't into it at all, and whenafter I watched until around episode 6, I asked my friend "When does the story get interesting?"
You could also say "when I had watched (until around) episode 6" but after is a shorter option.
My friend said "If you haven't found it interesting (so far / yet), then it's just not for you."
July 24, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
FI first, I started watching the anime "Demon Slayer" on Netflix about two years ago.
At the time, I wasn't into it at all, and w. When I had watched up until around episode 6, I asked my friend "When does the story get interesting?"
However, around six months ago, I started watching it again because it's been really popular, it and so made me curious.
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Barely needed to change anything, your English is really good!
July 24, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Demon Slayer
I might have written about Demon Slayer before, but I'd like to write about it again.
First of all, I started watching the anime Demon Slayer on Netflix about two years ago.
Or you could say "Firstly..."
At the time, I wasn't into it at all, and when I had watched until around episode 6, I asked my friend, "When does the story get interesting?"
(1) With a direct quote from someone, you should put a comma between the phrase mentioning the speaker and the speech itself.
(2) There's nothing really grammatically wrong with "when I had watched until around episode 6", but a more natural sounding way to convey the idea would be to say "when I was around 6 episodes in..."
My friend said, "If you haven't found it interesting, then it's just not for you."
So I dropped it.
However, around six months ago, I started watching it again because it's been really popular, itwhich made me curious.
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Great work, all the corrections were quite minor and didn't make things harder to read.
July 24, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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