milkyway's avatar
milkyway

Sept. 13, 2022

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Demand Mail

I received a demand email from the library.
Recently, I had been reading web novels instead of the book I borrowed from the library, and then the limit of the return expired about one month.
I just finished reading the book, I am going to return the book tomorrow.
Actually, it would be better to return the book to the return counter, but I'm afraid of being scolded, so I wiIl gently put it in the return post.
I apologized for it in my heart. I'm sorry.


図書館から督促のEメールが来てしまいました。
最近、ずっとWeb小説を読んでいて、図書館から借りた本を返却起源から1ヶ月ほど延滞してしまいました。
やっと読み終わったので、明日返しに行きます。
本当は窓口に返す方が良いのですが、怒られるのが怖いので、そっと返却ポストに入れておきます。
心の中で謝っておきます。ごめんなさい。

Corrections

Recently, I had been reading web novels instead of the book I borrowed from the library, and then the limit of the returninstead of reading the book I borrowed from the library, I read web novels, and then the requirement to return the book expired aboutfter one month.

Very difficult to understand what is being said. I thought you were saying you had borrowed web novels from the library instead of books, and they were demanding those.

Are you one month past the deadline or are you at the deadline which was one month from checkout?

I just finished reading the book,. I am going to return the book tomorrow.

Comma splice

Actually, iIt would be better to return the book to the return counter, but I'm afraid of being scolded, so I wiIl gently put it in the return post.

Actually doesn't really make sense there since it would imply you were correcting something previously stated.

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Don't be embarassed! I keep books longer all the time!

milkyway's avatar
milkyway

Sept. 14, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.
It is difficult to write what I want to say.

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bethieboo

Sept. 14, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections. It is difficult to write what I want to say.

I understand! It is all part of the learning process.

Demand MailLetter

I received a demand letter via email from the library.

Recently, I hadve been reading web novels instead of the book I borrowed from the library, and then the limit of the return expired about one month, about a month ago, the borrowing period expired.

This is a very tricky sentence.

I just finished reading the book, so I am going to return ithe book tomorrow.

AIt actually, it would be better to return the book to the return counter, but I'm afraid of being scolded, so I wiIll genquietly put it in the return post.

I'm very sorry to hear they scold people.

I apologized for it in my heart.

I'm sorry.

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上手に書けています!

milkyway's avatar
milkyway

Sept. 14, 2022

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Thank you for always correcting me.
Can I ask a question?
You said "tricky sentence". Does it means "be hard to handle the sentence" or "can not understand the situation"?

mari's avatar
mari

Sept. 14, 2022

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Thank you for always correcting me. Can I ask a question? You said "tricky sentence". Does it means "be hard to handle the sentence" or "can not understand the situation"?

I meant it's difficult to write for non native speakers so, yes, it's a sentence which is hard to handle. It's my way of saying, please don't feel bad about the corrections you're receiving because English can be difficult to figure out but please keep trying!

milkyway's avatar
milkyway

Sept. 15, 2022

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I don't feel bad at all.
I am always grateful for your help.
Yes, I will keep trying.

Demand Mail


Demand MailLetter

I received a demand email from the library.


I received a demand letter via email from the library.

Recently, I had been reading web novels instead of the book I borrowed from the library, and then the limit of the return expired about one month.


Recently, I hadve been reading web novels instead of the book I borrowed from the library, and then the limit of the return expired about one month, about a month ago, the borrowing period expired.

This is a very tricky sentence.

Recently, I had been reading web novels instead of the book I borrowed from the library, and then the limit of the returninstead of reading the book I borrowed from the library, I read web novels, and then the requirement to return the book expired aboutfter one month.

Very difficult to understand what is being said. I thought you were saying you had borrowed web novels from the library instead of books, and they were demanding those. Are you one month past the deadline or are you at the deadline which was one month from checkout?

I just finished reading the book, I am going to return the book tomorrow.


I just finished reading the book, so I am going to return ithe book tomorrow.

I just finished reading the book,. I am going to return the book tomorrow.

Comma splice

Actually, it would be better to return the book to the return counter, but I'm afraid of being scolded, so I wiIl gently put it in the return post.


AIt actually, it would be better to return the book to the return counter, but I'm afraid of being scolded, so I wiIll genquietly put it in the return post.

I'm very sorry to hear they scold people.

Actually, iIt would be better to return the book to the return counter, but I'm afraid of being scolded, so I wiIl gently put it in the return post.

Actually doesn't really make sense there since it would imply you were correcting something previously stated.

I apologized for it in my heart.


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I'm sorry.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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