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Definitely Coffe

Let me give a little context first. I'm from Colombia, a coffe-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffe everyday at everytime. However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffe since childhood. Me, for example, started to drink coffe since ten. Now, talking about tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but Chocolate. The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

Coffe, by the other side, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want: With milk, water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino's, etc. So for me the decision is clear, Coffe and just Coffe!


Primero, déjenme darles un poco de contexto. Soy de Colombia, un país cafetero, así que es normal y cultural tomar café todos los días a cualquier hora. Sin embargo, muchos extranjeros no saben que tomamos café desde la infancia. Yo, por ejemplo, empecé a tomar café a los diez años. Ahora bien, hablando de té y chocolate, no nos gusta mucho el té, sino más bien el chocolate. El problema con el chocolate caliente es que durante años tuve que vivir en otra ciudad y las personas con las que vivía y cuidaban de mi preparaban chocolate con agua, no con leche (desde pequeño me acostumbré a tomar chocolate con leche, así que pueden ver el problema aquí), y desde entonces no tomo chocolate.

El café, por otro lado, es fantástico porque puedes prepararlo como quieras: con leche, agua, con azúcar o sin azúcar, puedes preparar capuchinos, etc. Así que para mí la decisión es muy clara: ¡café y solo café!

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Definitely Coffee

Let me give a little context first.

I'm from Colombia, a coffe-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffe everyday at everytimee throughout the day.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffe since childhood.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe sincewhen I was ten.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but Cwe are into chocolate.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I dohave not driank chocolate.

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:

With milk, water, with sugar or not(optional), you can prepare capuccino's, etc.

So, for me, the decision is clear, Coffee and just Coffee!

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forgot to write coffee with the second e in the second sentence. The one that starts with "I´m from Colombia[...]"
also in the next sentence: "[...] is, that for years [...]" the had to live with means one was forced to live with them so changing that to " and the people I lived with and took care of me " second verb needs to be changed too. bcs it is something that happened in the past. or the first needs to be put into present, If one still lives with them and they take care. But same tense is key

Definitely Coffee

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffee everyday at everytime.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffee since childhood.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe since at age ten.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since a young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

Coffee, by the other side, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:

So for me the decision is clear, Coffee and just Coffee!

I'm from Colombia, a coffe-growing countryuntry that is known for it's coffee, so it i's normal and cultural to drink coffee everyday at everanytime.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we have been drinking coffee since childhood.

Me, for example,I started to drink coffe since tene when I was ten years old.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, wWe are not really into tea, but Cwe love (hot) chocolate.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since a young age so you can see the problem here) and since then, I dohave not driank hot chocolate.

se dice "hot chocolate" . seria extrano que escribas "chocolate"

Coffe, by the other side, it'e is fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:.

With milk, water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino's, etcYu can prepare coffee ...with milk, water, or sugar.

So for me the decision is clear, Ceasy: coffee and just Ccoffee!

Definitely Coffee

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffee everyday at everyany time.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffee since childhood.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe since tene at the age of 10.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but we like Chocolate.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drinking chocolate with milk sinceat a young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenhowever you want:

With milk, water, with sugar or nowithout, you can prepare cappuccino's, etc.

So for me the decision is clear, Ccoffee and just Ccoffee!

Definitely Coffee

Let me give a little context first.

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and culturtraditional to drink coffee every day at every time.

However, a lot of foreign peopleers don't know that we drink coffe sincee beginning from childhood.

Me, fFor example, I started to drink coffe sincee at ten.

Or 'when I was ten years old'.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate,: we are not really into tea, but Cchocolate.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years, I had to live in another city, and the people I had to live with and takemy housemates who took care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

Some of this is purely stylistic to make it more readable.

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:.

With milk, water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino's, etc.

So for me the decision is clear, Ccoffee and just Ccoffee!

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Definitely Coffee

Let me give a little context first.

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and culturculturally normal to drink coffee everyday at everyall times.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffe sincee from childhood.

"since" is okay, but "from" feels more natural for describing general phenomena.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe sincee at ten.

Since you're describing when you started to drink coffee, which is an event, we use "at". You could instead say:

"I, for example, have been drinking coffee since ten." if you want to use "since", because now we're describing an ongoing process.

Now, talking about[speaking of/on the subject of/regarding] tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but Cchocolate is popular.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take, who took care of me, prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I gotrather than milk. I was used to drinking hot chocolate with milk sincefrom a young age, so you can see the problem here) and s. Since then I do not drink hot chocolate anymore [or "I stopped drinking hot chocolate since."].

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenhowever you want:

You say "whenever" here, but in the next sentence you give examples of different *ways* of preparing coffee rather than *times*, so I would suggest "however" instead. Or, if you want to emphasize whenever as well, I would recommend "you can prepare it whenever and however you want:"

Wwith milk, or water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino'cappuccinos or other kinds, etc.

So for me the decision is clear, Ccoffee and just Ccoffee!

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Let me give a little context first.


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I'm from Colombia, a coffe-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffe everyday at everytime.


I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and culturculturally normal to drink coffee everyday at everyall times.

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and culturtraditional to drink coffee every day at every time.

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffee everyday at everyany time.

I'm from Colombia, a coffe-growing countryuntry that is known for it's coffee, so it i's normal and cultural to drink coffee everyday at everanytime.

I'm from Colombia, a coffee-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffee everyday at everytime.

I'm from Colombia, a coffe-growing country, so it is normal and cultural to drink coffe everyday at everytimee throughout the day.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffe since childhood.


However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffe sincee from childhood.

"since" is okay, but "from" feels more natural for describing general phenomena.

However, a lot of foreign peopleers don't know that we drink coffe sincee beginning from childhood.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffee since childhood.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we have been drinking coffee since childhood.

However, a lot of foreign people don't know that we drink coffee since childhood.

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Me, for example, started to drink coffe since ten.


MeI, for example, started to drink coffe sincee at ten.

Since you're describing when you started to drink coffee, which is an event, we use "at". You could instead say: "I, for example, have been drinking coffee since ten." if you want to use "since", because now we're describing an ongoing process.

Me, fFor example, I started to drink coffe sincee at ten.

Or 'when I was ten years old'.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe since tene at the age of 10.

Me, for example,I started to drink coffe since tene when I was ten years old.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe since at age ten.

MeI, for example, started to drink coffe sincewhen I was ten.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but Chocolate.


Now, talking about[speaking of/on the subject of/regarding] tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but Cchocolate is popular.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate,: we are not really into tea, but Cchocolate.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but we like Chocolate.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, wWe are not really into tea, but Cwe love (hot) chocolate.

Now, talking about tea and chocolate, we are not really into tea, but Cwe are into chocolate.

Coffe, by the other side, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:


Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenhowever you want:

You say "whenever" here, but in the next sentence you give examples of different *ways* of preparing coffee rather than *times*, so I would suggest "however" instead. Or, if you want to emphasize whenever as well, I would recommend "you can prepare it whenever and however you want:"

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:.

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenhowever you want:

Coffe, by the other side, it'e is fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:.

Coffee, by the other side, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:

Coffee, byon the other sidehand, it's fantastic because you can prepare it whenever you want:

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.


The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take, who took care of me, prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I gotrather than milk. I was used to drinking hot chocolate with milk sincefrom a young age, so you can see the problem here) and s. Since then I do not drink hot chocolate anymore [or "I stopped drinking hot chocolate since."].

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years, I had to live in another city, and the people I had to live with and takemy housemates who took care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

Some of this is purely stylistic to make it more readable.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drinking chocolate with milk sinceat a young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since a young age so you can see the problem here) and since then, I dohave not driank hot chocolate.

se dice "hot chocolate" . seria extrano que escribas "chocolate"

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since a young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I do not drink chocolate.

The thing about hot chocolate is that for years I had to live in another city and the people I had to live with and take care of me prepared chocolate mixed with water and not with milk, (I got used to drink chocolate with milk since young age so you can see the problem here) and since then I dohave not driank chocolate.

With milk, water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino's, etc.


Wwith milk, or water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino'cappuccinos or other kinds, etc.

With milk, water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino's, etc.

With milk, water, with sugar or nowithout, you can prepare cappuccino's, etc.

With milk, water, with sugar or not, you can prepare capuccino's, etcYu can prepare coffee ...with milk, water, or sugar.

With milk, water, with sugar or not(optional), you can prepare capuccino's, etc.

So for me the decision is clear, Coffe and just Coffe!


So for me the decision is clear, Ccoffee and just Ccoffee!

So for me the decision is clear, Ccoffee and just Ccoffee!

So for me the decision is clear, Ccoffee and just Ccoffee!

So for me the decision is clear, Ceasy: coffee and just Ccoffee!

So for me the decision is clear, Coffee and just Coffee!

So, for me, the decision is clear, Coffee and just Coffee!

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