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Jan. 6, 2021

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Decision-making

Today, I am going to talk about decision-making. The difference between adults and children when it comes to making decisions. I think that adults always weigh up the option before coming to a decision. They are tend to weigh everything up and look at things from all angles, thus sometimes cause they overcomplicate things. On the other hand, they may arrive at a sensible decision and sound judgement. However, children are very intuitive and more likely to follow their gut feeling to make a snap decision without deliberation. For example, if they want to buy a toy, they won’t think about how much it is and their family budgets.

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Decision-making

Today, I am going to talk about decision-making.

TAnd, in particular, the difference between adults and children when it comes to making decisions.

The sentence is incomplete.

I think that adults always weigh up the options before coming to a decision.

Consider "making a decision" instead of "coming to a decision"

They are tend to weigh up everything up and look at things from all angles, but thuis sometimes causes theym to overcomplicate things.

On the other hand, they may arrive at a sensible decision andvia sound judgement.

(Be aware of the alternate spelling of "judgement": "judgment".)

However, children are very intuitive and more likely to follow their gut feeling tos, and thereby make a snap decisions without deliberation.

For example, if they want to buy a toy, they won’t think about how much it is and their family budgets.

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ricky

Jan. 8, 2021

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Thank you~

Decision-making


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Today, I am going to talk about decision-making.


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The difference between adults and children when it comes to making decisions.


TAnd, in particular, the difference between adults and children when it comes to making decisions.

The sentence is incomplete.

I think that adults always weigh up the option before coming to a decision.


I think that adults always weigh up the options before coming to a decision.

Consider "making a decision" instead of "coming to a decision"

They are tend to weigh everything up and look at things from all angles, thus sometimes cause they overcomplicate things.


They are tend to weigh up everything up and look at things from all angles, but thuis sometimes causes theym to overcomplicate things.

On the other hand, they may arrive at a sensible decision and sound judgement.


On the other hand, they may arrive at a sensible decision andvia sound judgement.

(Be aware of the alternate spelling of "judgement": "judgment".)

However, children are very intuitive and more likely to follow their gut feeling to make a snap decision without deliberation.


However, children are very intuitive and more likely to follow their gut feeling tos, and thereby make a snap decisions without deliberation.

For example, if they want to buy a toy, they won’t think about how much it is and their family budgets.


For example, if they want to buy a toy, they won’t think about how much it is and their family budgets.

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