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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 21, 2021

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December 21st, 2021

I went for a walk and got back just a moment ago. While I was walking, the moon looked big, so I took a photo of it.
Here is the photo I upload to Twitter: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1473247941821603840


<p>ウォーキングに行って、さっき帰ってきました。歩いていると、月が大きく見えたので、写真を撮りました。</p>
<p>こちらがツイッターに投稿した写真です。</p>
<p>https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1473247941821603840</p>

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December 21st, 2021

I went for a walk and got back just a moment ago.

While I was walking, the moon looked big, so I took a photo of it.

Here is the photo that I uploaded to Twitter: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1473247941821603840

Use past tense here

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It's a really cool picture. Was it taken on your phone?

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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 22, 2021

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I took it using my digital camera.
Thank you!

December 21st, 2021


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I went for a walk and got back just a moment ago.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

While I was walking, the moon looked big, so I took a photo of it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here is the photo I upload to Twitter: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1473247941821603840


Here is the photo that I uploaded to Twitter: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1473247941821603840

Use past tense here

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