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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 1, 2021

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December 1st, 2021

The results of the buzzwords-of-the-year contest were announced today. The grand prize was a "two-way player ". It's because a Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter. He won the American League MVP. He gave us courage and energy.


<p>今日、今年の流行語大賞が発表されました。最優秀賞は「リアル二刀流」でした。メジャーリーグの大谷翔平選手が、ピッチャーとしてもバッターとしても活躍したからです。彼は、アメリカンリーグのMVPを受賞しました。</p>

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It's because a Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter in his team, the Los Angeles Angels.

You just needed a little more detail to make the sentence sound more complete.

He gave us Japanese people courage and energy.

You don't specify in earlier sentences who "us" is, so that's why I added "Japanese people". You could also just say "Japanese" too.

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nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 4, 2022

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Thank you!

The results of the b'Buzzwords-of-the-year contest' were announced today.

The grand prize(prize)winner was a "two-way player ".

It's because aA Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, won the prize as he played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter.

He gave usplayed with courage and energy.

gave us works too.

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Well done :)

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nambatsuyoshi

Jan. 24, 2022

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Thank you!

The grand prizewinner was a "two-way player ".

The prize is the thing that is given to the winner. And because you're talking about the word "two-way player" and not the thing itself, it's best not to use an article before it.

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Really well written!

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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 1, 2021

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Thank you!

December 1st, 2021


The results of the buzzwords-of-the-year contest were announced today.


The results of the b'Buzzwords-of-the-year contest' were announced today.

The grand prize was a "two-way player ".


The grand prizewinner was a "two-way player ".

The prize is the thing that is given to the winner. And because you're talking about the word "two-way player" and not the thing itself, it's best not to use an article before it.

The grand prize(prize)winner was a "two-way player ".

It's because a Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter.


It's because aA Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, won the prize as he played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter.

It's because a Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter in his team, the Los Angeles Angels.

You just needed a little more detail to make the sentence sound more complete.

He won the American League MVP.


He gave us courage and energy.


He gave usplayed with courage and energy.

gave us works too.

He gave us Japanese people courage and energy.

You don't specify in earlier sentences who "us" is, so that's why I added "Japanese people". You could also just say "Japanese" too.

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