December 18th, 2021

nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 18, 2021

I rode my motorcycle to Hirosawa Pond in Kyoto this morning. While I was riding, it was snowing. I wore a winter jacket that I bought at a shop for craftmen called Workman. It was warm even though it was not very expensive.
Here is a photo I uploaded to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CXm7xvIPy98/

今朝、バイクで京都の広沢池に行きました。バイクに乗っているとき、雪が降っていました。ワークマンのウィンタージャケットを着ました。そのジャケットはそんなに高くないですが暖かいです。
こちらがインスタにアップした写真です。
https://www.instagram.com/p/CXm7xvIPy98/

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Faizyrooma4

December 18th, 2021

I rode my motorcycle to Hirosawa Pond in Kyoto this morning.

While I was riding, it was snowing.

I wore a winter jacket that I bought at a shop for craftmen called Workman.

It was warm even though it was not very expensive.

Here is a photo I uploaded to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CXm7xvIPy98/

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Well-written, basically no mistakes to point out! (just as the other checker did, lol)

nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 18, 2021

Thank you!

Gabby

December 18th, 2021

I rode my motorcycle to Hirosawa Pond in Kyoto this morning.

While I was riding, it was snowing.

I wore a winter jacket that I bought at a shop for craftmen called Workman.

It was warm even though it was not very expensive.

Here is a photo I uploaded to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CXm7xvIPy98/

nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 18, 2021

Thank you!

December 18th, 2021