Dec. 17, 2021
December 17th, 2021
The Japanese women's curling team, "Loco Solare," played against Turkey last night, but they ended up losing. If they had won the game, they would have qualified for the Beijing Olympics. I am watching the game between Japan and Korea now. If they win the game, they will qualify for the Olympics.
<p>昨晩、日本の「ロコソラーレ」というカーリングチームが、トルコと対戦しましたが、負けてしまいました。もし、その試合に勝っていたら、北京オリンピックの出場権を得ることができていました。今、日本と韓国の試合を見ています。この試合に勝てば、オリンピックの出場権を獲得できます。</p>
December 17th, 2021
The Japanese women's curling team, "Loco Solare," played against Turkey last night, but they ended up losing.
If they had won the game, they would have qualified for the Beijing Olympics.
I am watching the game between Japan and Korea now.
Perfect sentence, but just as a suggestion for better writing, you can write "Now, I am watching the game between Japan and Korea" or "Currently, I am watching the game between Japan and Korea." It means the same thing, but overall in the paragraph, it helps bridge the previous sentence to the current topic. In the previous sentence we were talking about the past, and now, we're talking about the present.
If they win the game, they will qualify for the Olympics.
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I can tell your English is already at a high level, so I'm only making a small suggestion to make your writing a little bit more consistent/cleaner.
Dec. 18, 2021
Thank you!
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December 17th, 2021 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Japanese women's curling team, "Loco Solare," played against Turkey last night, but they ended up losing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If they had won the game, they would have qualified for the Beijing Olympics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am watching the game between Japan and Korea now. I am watching the game between Japan and Korea now. Perfect sentence, but just as a suggestion for better writing, you can write "Now, I am watching the game between Japan and Korea" or "Currently, I am watching the game between Japan and Korea." It means the same thing, but overall in the paragraph, it helps bridge the previous sentence to the current topic. In the previous sentence we were talking about the past, and now, we're talking about the present. |
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If they win the game, they will qualify for the Olympics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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