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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 15, 2021

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December 15th, 2021

I read an article online about monkey today. In the article, I looked at the monkeys in a hot spring in Hokkaido. They looked very comfortable. There is a very famous hot spring in Nagano that monkeys are bathing. I wonder if they aren't cold when they get out of the hot springs?
Here is the article: https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/6bf3f9a7ce330363d408548adb74d1a71fb4168e/images/000


<p>今日、猿についてのネットの記事を読みました。その記事で、北海道で温泉に入る猿を見ました。彼らはとても気持ちよさそうです。長野には猿が入る有名な温泉があります。彼らは温泉から出たとき寒くないのでしょうか?</p>
<p>こちらがその記事です。</p>
<p>https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/6bf3f9a7ce330363d408548adb74d1a71fb4168e/images/000</p>

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December 15th, 2021

I read an article online about monkeys today.

In the article, I looked at thethere was a photo of monkeys in a hot spring in Hokkaido.

While your original sentence was not incorrect, it just sounds a bit odd. It would fit better in the context of "When I was at the zoo, I looked at/saw the monkeys".

They looked very comfortable.

There is a very famous hot spring in Nagano that monkeys are bathe ing.

I wonder if they aren't cold when they get out of the hot springs?

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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 15, 2021

4

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December 15th, 2021


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I read an article online about monkey today.


I read an article online about monkeys today.

In the article, I looked at the monkeys in a hot spring in Hokkaido.


In the article, I looked at thethere was a photo of monkeys in a hot spring in Hokkaido.

While your original sentence was not incorrect, it just sounds a bit odd. It would fit better in the context of "When I was at the zoo, I looked at/saw the monkeys".

They looked very comfortable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is a very famous hot spring in Nagano that monkeys are bathing.


There is a very famous hot spring in Nagano that monkeys are bathe ing.

I wonder if they aren't cold when they get out of the hot springs?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here is the article: https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/6bf3f9a7ce330363d408548adb74d1a71fb4168e/images/000


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