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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 14, 2021

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December 14, 2021

I watched the Gemini meteor shower last night. However, I watched them on YouTube live broadcast. First, I watched them at the Tokyo University Observatory in Nagano. I was able to see one shooting star in a few minutes. Next, I watched them at Mauna Kea Observatory in Hawaii. I was able to a lot of shooting stars.


<p>昨晩、ふたご座流星群を見ました。ただし、YouTubeのライブ中継です。最初、長野に東京大学の観測所のライブ中継を見ました。数分に一つの流れ星が見えました。その後、ハワイのマウナケア山の観測所のライブ中継を見ました。たくさんの流れ星を見ることができました。</p>

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December 14, 2021

I watched the Gemini meteor shower last night.

However, I watched themit (the shower - singular) on YouTube live broadcast.

First, IPreviously, I had watched ithem at the Tokyo University Observatory in Nagano.

I suppose these showers are often, and you have watched them multiple times..

I was able to see one shooting star in a few minutes.

NextLater, I watched them at Mauna Kea Observatory in Hawaii.

Please beware of the adverbs in the timelime (Previously, later etc.)

I was able to watch a lot of shooting stars.

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losingmybellyfat

Dec. 14, 2021

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I was able to see one shooting star in a few minutes.

Sorry this should have been "for a few minutes", i oversaw it.

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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 14, 2021

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Thank you!

December 14, 2021


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I watched the Gemini meteor shower last night.


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However, I watched them on YouTube live broadcast.


However, I watched themit (the shower - singular) on YouTube live broadcast.

First, I watched them at the Tokyo University Observatory in Nagano.


First, IPreviously, I had watched ithem at the Tokyo University Observatory in Nagano.

I suppose these showers are often, and you have watched them multiple times..

I was able to see one shooting star in a few minutes.


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Next, I watched them at Mauna Kea Observatory in Hawaii.


NextLater, I watched them at Mauna Kea Observatory in Hawaii.

Please beware of the adverbs in the timelime (Previously, later etc.)

I was able to a lot of shooting stars.


I was able to watch a lot of shooting stars.

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