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sota

Dec. 16, 2020

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December 12

I ran this morning. I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses. Spain is still hot even in December. When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.


朝から走ってきた。海岸沿いを走ったらすごく気持ちが良くストレスも発散できた。スペインは12月だっていうのにまだ暑い。日本に帰ったら寒さで風邪引きそう。

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December 12

I ran this morning.

I felt really good because I ran along the coast, and I relieved my many stresses.

I agree with the other commenter that it doesn't sound right to say "I relieved my many stresses"-- this is because English doesn't talk about stress relief in a reflexive manner. The thing that relieves stress is never oneself.

Spain is still hot even in December.

When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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Thank you for correcting!

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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I felt really good because I ran along the coast, and I relieved my many stresses.

What is the better way to say that instead of "I relieved my many stresses."?

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cattywampus

Dec. 19, 2020

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I would say that "the run relieved my stress" or "I felt less stressed (because of the run."

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sota

Dec. 19, 2020

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I would say that "the run relieved my stress" or "I felt less stressed (because of the run."

Ok! Thank you!

December 12

I rawent for a run this morning.

This is more idiomatic, though the original is also fine.

I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses, which had been at a high level.

We don't really say "stresses" unless we're discussing "stress" in a language or music sense.

With the new phrasing, "reduced" might be better than "relieved."

Spain is still hot even in December.

When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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Thank you for correcting!

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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I rawent for a run this morning.

I studied that after for is with - ing but in this case is not.
Why?

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses, which had been at a high level.

So, I reduced my stress is better?

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profitendieu

Dec. 17, 2020

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So, I reduced my stress is better?

"I relieved by stress" is best, but it suggests that your stress more or less went away (at least temporarily), whereas "reduced" or "lowered" ("lowered" seems more common, actually) suggests that you may still be under a bit of pressure, just not as much anymore. So it depends on what you want to convey.

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profitendieu

Dec. 17, 2020

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I studied that after for is with - ing but in this case is not. Why?

Sorry, but I'm not quite sure which part you're referring to, or how it connects to this specific sentence? Quotation marks might also be helpful here.

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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"I relieved by stress" is best, but it suggests that your stress more or less went away (at least temporarily), whereas "reduced" or "lowered" ("lowered" seems more common, actually) suggests that you may still be under a bit of pressure, just not as much anymore. So it depends on what you want to convey.

I got it! Thank you so much!

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sota

Dec. 17, 2020

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Sorry, but I'm not quite sure which part you're referring to, or how it connects to this specific sentence? Quotation marks might also be helpful here.

I'm sorry. I'll write more clearly now.
If I use "for", Should I change a verb to -ing?
Ex. I woke up early for "making" breakfast.

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profitendieu

Dec. 17, 2020

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I'm sorry. I'll write more clearly now. If I use "for", Should I change a verb to -ing? Ex. I woke up early for "making" breakfast.

Thanks, that makes more sense. Off the top of my head, it’s true that we need the “-ing” form after “for,” but in your example, “to” would be better. I associate “for” with adjectival phrases, like “an app for tuning one’s instrument.”

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sota

Dec. 18, 2020

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Thanks, that makes more sense. Off the top of my head, it’s true that we need the “-ing” form after “for,” but in your example, “to” would be better. I associate “for” with adjectival phrases, like “an app for tuning one’s instrument.”

ok! I really understand now! Thank you.

December 12


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I ran this morning.


I rawent for a run this morning.

This is more idiomatic, though the original is also fine.

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I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses.


I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses, which had been at a high level.

We don't really say "stresses" unless we're discussing "stress" in a language or music sense. With the new phrasing, "reduced" might be better than "relieved."

I felt really good because I ran along the coast, and I relieved my many stresses.

I agree with the other commenter that it doesn't sound right to say "I relieved my many stresses"-- this is because English doesn't talk about stress relief in a reflexive manner. The thing that relieves stress is never oneself.

Spain is still hot even in December.


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When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.


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