Dec. 16, 2020
I ran this morning. I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses. Spain is still hot even in December. When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.
朝から走ってきた。海岸沿いを走ったらすごく気持ちが良くストレスも発散できた。スペインは12月だっていうのにまだ暑い。日本に帰ったら寒さで風邪引きそう。
December 12
I ran this morning.
I felt really good because I ran along the coast, and I relieved my many stresses.
I agree with the other commenter that it doesn't sound right to say "I relieved my many stresses"-- this is because English doesn't talk about stress relief in a reflexive manner. The thing that relieves stress is never oneself.
Spain is still hot even in December.
When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.
December 12
I rawent for a run this morning.
This is more idiomatic, though the original is also fine.
I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses, which had been at a high level.
We don't really say "stresses" unless we're discussing "stress" in a language or music sense.
With the new phrasing, "reduced" might be better than "relieved."
Spain is still hot even in December.
When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold.
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December 12 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I ran this morning. I This is more idiomatic, though the original is also fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my many stresses. I felt really good because I ran along the coast and I relieved my We don't really say "stresses" unless we're discussing "stress" in a language or music sense. With the new phrasing, "reduced" might be better than "relieved." I felt really good because I ran along the coast, and I relieved my many stresses. I agree with the other commenter that it doesn't sound right to say "I relieved my many stresses"-- this is because English doesn't talk about stress relief in a reflexive manner. The thing that relieves stress is never oneself. |
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Spain is still hot even in December. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I go back to Japan, I will probably catch a cold because of the cold. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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