Dec. 6, 2020
Usually, I have a Chinese class for a girl at 10 am on Sunday morning. It’s a online class. But today the girl called me at 10:05 when I was waiting for her on Zoom. She told me that she just woke up because she had a party last night and she slept very very late. She asked me if the class can start later or cancel. I heard that her voice was unclear. She absolutely didn’t really wake up yet. I don’t think it’ll be a good idea to wait her for I don’t know how much time and probably she will still be sleepy in the class. I thought the best is to cancel the class.
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I thought the best solution is to cancel the class.
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Dec, 6th, 2020
Usually, I have a Chinese class for a with a woman|girl at 10 am on Sunday morning.
Unless she's younger than 18, using "girl" instead of "woman" might annoy some people.
If you're teaching the class (which I think is the case here), you could say "I hold a Chinese class for a woman..."
It’s an online class.
But today the woman|girl called me at 10:05 when I was waiting for her on Zoom.
She told me that she had just woken up because she had had a party last night and she slept very very late.
She asked me if the class canould start later or be cancelled.
I could heard that her voice was unclear.
Here, "I heard" suggests a momentary event. But this was something you could hear over time. (This is a subtle point, so you don't need to worry about it too much.)
She absolutely dihadn’t really waoken up yet.
I doidn’t think it’ll would be a good idea to wait her forfor her, since I doidn’t know how much time and probably she willit would take her, and she would probably still be sleepy during the class.
I thought thit would be best is to cancel the class.
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Good job!
In English, unlike some other languages, when you're talking about a point in the past in which you were thinking about the future, you need to use the past or conditional:
I DIDN'T think it WOULD BE a good idea.
I thought it WOULD BE best to cancel the class.
Dec, 6th, 2020
It’s a online class.
But today the girl called me at 10:05 when I was waiting for her on Zoom.
She told me that she just woke up because she had a party last night and she slept very very late.
She asked me if the class canould start later, or if we could cancel.
She absolutereally dihadn’'t really wawoken up yet.
I don’'t think it’ll be's a good idea to wait her forfor her, because I don’'t know how much time and probablylong I'll be waiting, and she will probably still be sleepy in the classlesson.
I thought thit would be best is to cancel the class.
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Easily understandable, well done!
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Usually, I have a Chinese class for a girl at 10 am on Sunday morning. Usually, I have a Chinese class Unless she's younger than 18, using "girl" instead of "woman" might annoy some people. If you're teaching the class (which I think is the case here), you could say "I hold a Chinese class for a woman..." Usually, I |
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It’s a online class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It’s an online class. It’s an online class. |
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But today the girl called me at 10:05 when I was waiting for her on Zoom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But today the woman|girl called me at 10:05 when I was waiting for her on Zoom. But today the girl called me at 10:05 while |
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She told me that she just woke up because she had a party last night and she slept very very late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She told me that she had just woken up because she had had a party last night and she slept very very late. She told me that she had just woken up because she had a party last night and She told me that she had just woken up because she had a party |
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I heard that her voice was unclear. I could hear Here, "I heard" suggests a momentary event. But this was something you could hear over time. (This is a subtle point, so you don't need to worry about it too much.) I |
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I thought the best is to cancel the class. I thought I thought I thought the best solution is to cancel the class. |
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