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Dec. 17th, 2020 First Aid Training

These 2 days, I was busy. I did the First Aid and CPR Taining course. It was a little bit hard during this time, you know, the pandemic time. There were only 6 students in the class room. Before the pandemic, there were usually 18 students. Every one had own space and materials to keep distance. We didn't allowed to change position and doing any team work. Of course we had to wear mask all the time.

The teacher was very nice. But his speaking was a little bit fast, and there were many words that I don't know, especially the names of diseases and medicines. Some times I had to ask him to spelling them, then translated them. Fortunately, I passed the exam.

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Dec. 17th, 2020 First Aid Training

These past 2 days, I washave been busy.

have been - you started being busy 2 days ago, and continued to be busy for the past two days

Use "have been" when an action starts in the and lasts at least up until the present.

I did the First Aid and CPR Training course.

It was a little bit hard during thisese times, you know, during the pandemic time.

"These times" refers to a period of time or an era
"This time" refers to one specific time (often it is the oppose

These times are challenging for all of us.
The times in ancient Greece happened long ago.

This time when I went walking, I saw a dog.
I want you to come with me this time because you didn't come last time.

There were only 6 students in the class room.

"classroom" is 1 word in English
but "living room" is 2 words
It depends on the specific example if it is 1 or 2 words

Before the pandemic, there were usually 18 students.

Every one had their own space and materials to keep their distance.

everyone - 大家
every one - 每一个(东西/人)

Everyone stood up.
Every one of the toys was red.
Every one of us was happy.

We didweren't allowed to change position and doingmove around the room or do any team work.

Of course we had to wear a mask all the time.

The teacher was very nice.

But his speaking was a little bit fast, and there were many words that I doidn't know, especially the names of diseases and medicines.

Some times I had to ask him to spelling them, and then translated them.

Fortunately, I passed the exam.

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hym

Dec. 19, 2020

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It was a little bit hard during thisese times, you know, during the pandemic time.

Oh my god, I've never thought that these two words are different. Thank you!

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hym

Dec. 19, 2020

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Your corrections and comments are really useful. It really opened my eyes. Thank you so much!

Dec. 17th, 2020 First Aid Training

Theose 2 days, I was busy.

I did thea First Aid and CPR Taining course.

It was a little bit hard doing it during this time, you know, because of the pandemic time.

There were only 6 students in the class room.

Before the pandemic, there were usually 18 students.

Every one had their own space and materials to keep distance.

We didweren't allowed to change positionmove around and doing any team work.

Of course we had to wear masks all the time.

The teacher was very nice.

But his speakingech was a little bit fast, and there were many words that I doidn't know, especially the names of diseases and medicines.

Some times I had to ask him to spelling them out, then translated them.

Fortunately, I passed the exam.

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Well done! Sounds pretty rough doing a course at this time.

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hym

Dec. 19, 2020

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Yes, it was not easy. Thank you so much for your corrections. It's very useful.

Dec. 17th, 2020 First Aid Training


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These 2 days, I was busy.


Theose 2 days, I was busy.

These past 2 days, I washave been busy.

have been - you started being busy 2 days ago, and continued to be busy for the past two days Use "have been" when an action starts in the and lasts at least up until the present.

I did the First Aid and CPR Taining course.


I did thea First Aid and CPR Taining course.

I did the First Aid and CPR Training course.

It was a little bit hard during this time, you know, the pandemic time.


It was a little bit hard doing it during this time, you know, because of the pandemic time.

It was a little bit hard during thisese times, you know, during the pandemic time.

"These times" refers to a period of time or an era "This time" refers to one specific time (often it is the oppose These times are challenging for all of us. The times in ancient Greece happened long ago. This time when I went walking, I saw a dog. I want you to come with me this time because you didn't come last time.

There were only 6 students in the class room.


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There were only 6 students in the class room.

"classroom" is 1 word in English but "living room" is 2 words It depends on the specific example if it is 1 or 2 words

Before the pandemic, there were usually 18 students.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Every one had own space and materials to keep distance.


Every one had their own space and materials to keep distance.

Every one had their own space and materials to keep their distance.

everyone - 大家 every one - 每一个(东西/人) Everyone stood up. Every one of the toys was red. Every one of us was happy.

We didn't allowed to change position and doing any team work.


We didweren't allowed to change positionmove around and doing any team work.

We didweren't allowed to change position and doingmove around the room or do any team work.

Of course we had to wear mask all the time.


Of course we had to wear masks all the time.

Of course we had to wear a mask all the time.

The teacher was very nice.


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But his speaking was a little bit fast, and there were many words that I don't know, especially the names of diseases and medicines.


But his speakingech was a little bit fast, and there were many words that I doidn't know, especially the names of diseases and medicines.

But his speaking was a little bit fast, and there were many words that I doidn't know, especially the names of diseases and medicines.

Some times I had to ask him to spelling them, then translated them.


Some times I had to ask him to spelling them out, then translated them.

Some times I had to ask him to spelling them, and then translated them.

Fortunately, I passed the exam.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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