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Dec. 13, 2020 please correct me

I wrote a email to my teacher for asking 2 days off. Please correct me.Thank you in advance.

Good morning XX

I'm writing the email for asking 2 days off on Wednesday and Thursday. Because I have a course of the First Aid. It'll be on these 2 days from 9 am to 5 pm. I had applied the course 9 months ago, unfortunately, the lockdown was coming. It had canceled. Now I got the opportunity again.
Could you please send the PPT of the 2 days classes to me? I will study them in the weekend. Thank you.

All the best
Hym

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I wrote an email to my teacher for asking for 2 days off.

I'm writing theis email for asking 2 days off onto request from you that I will need 2 days off this week, which are Wednesday and Thursday.

BThe reason behind this is because I have a course of then First Aid training.

I had applied theo this course 9 months ago, however, unfortunately, because of the lockdown, it was comingancelled.

It had canceled.

Now, I gothave gotten the opportunity to take this training again.

Could you please sendMay I request that the PPT ofor these 2 days classes days be sent to me?

I will study them idiligently on the weekend, and I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email.

The added part, " I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email," is just something I would personally say. You don't need to add it if you don't want to.

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Very nice email. Hope your professor understands and will send you the ppt. If not, do you have any classmates that would be willing to share their notes?

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hym

Dec. 15, 2020

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Thank you so much for your correction. My teacher told me don't worry about it. It will be the last 2 classes befor Chrestmas, nothing is really important. Thank you

Dec. 13, 2020 please correct me

I wrote a email to my teacher for asking 2 days off.

I wrote an email to my teacher for asking for 2 days off.

Please correct me.Thank you in advance.

Good morning XX

I'm writing the email for asking 2 days off on Wednesday and Thursday.

I'm writing theis email for asking 2 days off onto request from you that I will need 2 days off this week, which are Wednesday and Thursday.

Because I have a course of the First Aid.

BThe reason behind this is because I have a course of then First Aid training.

It'll be on these 2 days from 9 am to 5 pm.

I had applied the course 9 months ago, unfortunately, the lockdown was coming.

I had applied theo this course 9 months ago, however, unfortunately, because of the lockdown, it was comingancelled.

It had canceled.

It had canceled.

Now I got the opportunity again.

Now, I gothave gotten the opportunity to take this training again.

Could you please send the PPT of the 2 days classes to me?

Could you please sendMay I request that the PPT ofor these 2 days classes days be sent to me?

I will study them in the weekend.

I will study them idiligently on the weekend, and I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email.

The added part, " I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email," is just something I would personally say. You don't need to add it if you don't want to.

Thank you.

All the best

Hym

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