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Dec. 12, 2020

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Dec. 11th, 2020

First, no gifts today. Hahaha...

Today is Friday. People like Friday. They always say :" Thank god, it's Friday!" So it's apparently a good day today.

I learned how to make a Crunchy Rise Cake from a friend today. I hope it's the right name. It's super easy to make. 1. Put one cup of syrup + one cup of brown sugar and one cup of peanut butter to a pot. 2. Heat and stir them to melt. 3. Put the crunchy rise in the pot, then stir it to mix them. 4. Put the mix thing to a ware or mould, flat it. 5. Put it into the fridge for 1 hour to let it cool down. Then you can cut it and eat it. It was very delicious.

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They always say :" , "Thank god, it's Friday!"

So it's apparently, it's a good day today.

Both are right, but "so apparently" sounds more natural.

I learned how to make a Crunchy Risce Cake from a friend today.

You already said today, so you don't need to repeat it.

I hope ithat's the right name.

1. Putour one cup of syrup +, one cup of brown sugar and one cup of peanut butter into a pot.

2. Heat and stir them tountil they melt.

3. Put the crunchy risce in the pot, then stir it to mix themeverything together.

4. Put the mixing thing to a ware or mould, and flatten it.

I'm not sure what you mean by "to a ware"?

Then, you can cut it and eat it.

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hym

Dec. 14, 2020

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4. Put the mixing thing to a ware or mould, and flatten it.

container? Sorry I got it from transletor

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hym

Dec. 14, 2020

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Thank you for your correction.

I hope it's the right name.


I hope ithat's the right name.

It's super easy to make.


I learned how to make a Crunchy Rise Cake from a friend today.


I learned how to make a Crunchy Risce Cake from a friend today.

You already said today, so you don't need to repeat it.

Dec. 11th, 2020


First, no gifts today.


Hahaha...


Today is Friday.


People like Friday.


They always say :" Thank god, it's Friday!"


They always say :" , "Thank god, it's Friday!"

So it's apparently a good day today.


So it's apparently, it's a good day today.

Both are right, but "so apparently" sounds more natural.

1. Put one cup of syrup + one cup of brown sugar and one cup of peanut butter to a pot.


1. Putour one cup of syrup +, one cup of brown sugar and one cup of peanut butter into a pot.

2. Heat and stir them to melt.


2. Heat and stir them tountil they melt.

3. Put the crunchy rise in the pot, then stir it to mix them.


3. Put the crunchy risce in the pot, then stir it to mix themeverything together.

4. Put the mix thing to a ware or mould, flat it.


4. Put the mixing thing to a ware or mould, and flatten it.

I'm not sure what you mean by "to a ware"?

5. Put it into the fridge for 1 hour to let it cool down.


Then you can cut it and eat it.


Then, you can cut it and eat it.

It was very delicious.


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