July 27, 2021
Death penalty.
This is a controversial topic. Some areas of the society agree and others disagree, every one has their own reasons.
The people agree about death penalty assure that it is a penalty for keeping save the society of people that represent a big jeopardy for the majorities in the society. They affirm that the death penalty is for special situations and infractions, like, pederasty or serial killers. Moreover. They believe that this penalty control bad behaves. This works like an example of the consequences of a bad behave.
In the other hand. Some people disagree about this penalty, because they think that we do not have right for taking the life of another person. They affirm that every person has the right to change and become a better person, but if you take their lives, you steal this opportunity from them. Besides death penalty is illegal in the constitution and laws of the country as in the constitution is established the right to live and the respect for it.
In conclusion. Every one has a point in this discussion. Some, in that the majority have rights of safety over a dangerous minority. Other have a point in that no one has the right over the life of another and it is illegal under country laws.
Death penalty.
This is a controversial topic.
Some pareats of the society agree and others disagree with it, every one has their own reasons.
The people agree about who support the death penalty assure us that it is a penalty for keeping save the society of people that represent a big jeopardy for the majorities in the societynecessary to keep society safe from the worst kinds of criminals.
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Pederasty refers specifically to sex between a man and a boy and is rarely used in modern contexts.
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Controversial topic indeed. I know that in the US at least there have been government studies which show that the death penalty is not an effective deterrent to crime.
July 28, 2021
Thank you.
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Death penalty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a controversial topic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some areas of the society agree and others disagree, every one has their own reasons. Some par |
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The people agree about death penalty assure that it is a penalty for keeping save the society of people that represent a big jeopardy for the majorities in the society. The people Your original sentence was a bit hard to understand. I think you meant something like this. |
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They affirm that the death penalty is for special situations and infractions, like, pederasty or serial killers. They Pederasty refers specifically to sex between a man and a boy and is rarely used in modern contexts. |
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Moreover.
This is not a complete sentence. |
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They believe that this penalty control bad behaves.
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This works like an example of the consequences of a bad behave.
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In the other hand.
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Some people disagree about this penalty, because they think that we do not have right for taking the life of another person.
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They affirm that every person has the right to change and become a better person, but if you take their lives, you steal this opportunity from them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides death penalty is illegal in the constitution and laws of the country as in the constitution is established the right to live and the respect for it. Besides, the death penalty is Are you referring to a specific country, or some countries? |
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In conclusion.
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Every one has a point in this discussion.
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Some, in that the majority have rights of safety over a dangerous minority. Some |
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Other have a point in that no one has the right over the life of another and it is illegal under country laws. Other |
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