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Dec. 6, 2022

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December 6, 2022
At 10 a.m. on December 6, the CPC Central Committee, the Standing Committee of the National People's Congress, the State Council, the CPPCC National Committee and the Central Military Commission held a grand memorial meeting for Comrade Jiang Zemin in the Great Hall of the People in Beijing. Everyone brimmed with sadness.
He is also survived by his wife, two sons and two grandchildren.


中文:12月6日上午10时,党中央、全国人大常委会、国务院、全国政协、中央军委在北京人民大会堂隆重举行江泽民同志追悼大会。
每个人都很伤心,他去世了,留下了他的妻子、两个儿子和孙子。

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deathA Funeral

This title would be more natural in the US.

December 6, 2022

At 10 a.m. on December 6, the CPC Central Committee, the Standing Committee of the National People's Congress, the State Council, the CPPCC National Committee and the Central Military Commission held a grand memorial meeting for Comrade Jiang Zemin in the Great Hall of the People in Beijing.

Everyone brimmwas filled with sadnessgrief.

This is more natural in the US.

He is also survived by his wife, two sons and two grandchildren.

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Very well written.

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tongxing

Dec. 7, 2022

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Thank you!!!

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deathA Funeral

This title would be more natural in the US.

December 6, 2022


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At 10 a.m. on December 6, the CPC Central Committee, the Standing Committee of the National People's Congress, the State Council, the CPPCC National Committee and the Central Military Commission held a grand memorial meeting for Comrade Jiang Zemin in the Great Hall of the People in Beijing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everyone brimmed with sadness.


Everyone brimmwas filled with sadnessgrief.

This is more natural in the US.

He is also survived by his wife, two sons and two grandchildren.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

中文:12月6日上午10时,党中央、全国人大常委会、国务院、全国政协、中央军委在北京人民大会堂隆重举行江泽民同志追悼大会。


每个人都很伤心,他去世了,留下了他的妻子、两个儿子和孙子。


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