Aug. 11, 2025
Lots of good things happend with me on my day. I learned lots of new things. I fell better than yesterday. I was very sick yesterday, I don't have already problems. I leardned mathe chemistry and english today. I improved my english vocabulary. I will regulary revise englisch words every day how I don't forget it. I would like tell talles my school. My teacher is very kind and they helped me in the study. But I have some teacher, who I don't like. Such as my mathe teacher. You don't explain clearly. But I still like math. I study alone. I like logical connection. I like chemistry, mathe and biology. I want to continue learning with these. I would like doctor to be. My English skills are very low. :(( I hoppe after lots of exercise, go well. I will make many mistakes at first, but I will learn a lot from these mistakes. I want to do well.
Dear Diarly
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I learned lots of new things.
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I leardnstudied mathe, chemistry and eEnglish today.
(1) "Study" is more appropriate than "learn" here.
(2) The names of languages like "English" are proper nouns and hence capitalised.
I improved my eEnglish vocabulary.
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"English words" is plural, so it should be "them" and not "it".
I would like tello tallesk about my school.
I assume you meant to say "tell tales about my school". Reading on, you don't seem to be telling any stories, so I think "talk about my school" would be more appropriate.
My teacher is very kind and they helped me in themy studyies.
(1) For general facts such as this one, we will use the present tense ("help") The past tense ("helped") would refer to a specific incident in the past.
(2) Note that you're only referring to one teacher here. For more than one teacher, you would say "My teachers are very kind".
But I (also) have some teacher,s whom I don't like.,
You may consider adding "also" so that the writing flows more smoothly from the previous sentence to this one.
Ssuch as my mathe teacher.
I would suggest merging this sentence with the previous one. I have edited both of them to allow for this.
YouThey don't explain things clearly.
I assume you're talking about your msth teacher here. You also need to clarify what it is that they don't explain clearly.
But I still like math.
I study alone.
I like logical connection.
I like chemistry, mathe and biology.
I want to continue learning withstudying thesem.
I would like to be a doctor to be.
My English skills are very lowpoor.
For skills, "poor" would be the more appropriate word.
:(( I hoppe that after lots of exercise,practice, everything will go well.
You need to state what it is you hope will "go well."
I will make many mistakes at first, but I will learn a lot from these mistakes.
I want to do well.
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Lots of good things happend with me on my day. Lots of good things happened |
I learned lots of new things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I fell better than yesterday. I fel |
I was very sick yesterday, I don't have already problems. I was very sick yesterday, but I don't have a "But" will help connect the two parts of the sentence smoothly. |
I leardned mathe chemistry and english today. I (1) "Study" is more appropriate than "learn" here. (2) The names of languages like "English" are proper nouns and hence capitalised. |
I improved my english vocabulary. I improved my |
I will regulary revise englisch words every day how I don't forget it. I will regularly revise "English words" is plural, so it should be "them" and not "it". |
I would like tell talles my school. I would like t I assume you meant to say "tell tales about my school". Reading on, you don't seem to be telling any stories, so I think "talk about my school" would be more appropriate. |
My teacher is very kind and they helped me in the study. My teacher is very kind and they help (1) For general facts such as this one, we will use the present tense ("help") The past tense ("helped") would refer to a specific incident in the past. (2) Note that you're only referring to one teacher here. For more than one teacher, you would say "My teachers are very kind". |
But I have some teacher, who I don't like. But I (also) have some teacher You may consider adding "also" so that the writing flows more smoothly from the previous sentence to this one. |
Such as my mathe teacher.
I would suggest merging this sentence with the previous one. I have edited both of them to allow for this. |
You don't explain clearly.
I assume you're talking about your msth teacher here. You also need to clarify what it is that they don't explain clearly. |
But I still like math. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I study alone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I like logical connection. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I like chemistry, mathe and biology. I like chemistry, math |
I want to continue learning with these. I want to continue |
I would like doctor to be. I would like to be a doctor |
My English skills are very low. My English skills are very For skills, "poor" would be the more appropriate word. |
:(( I hoppe after lots of exercise, go well. :(( I hop You need to state what it is you hope will "go well." |
I will make many mistakes at first, but I will learn a lot from these mistakes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I want to do well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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