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Sept. 9, 2020

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Describe to an alien visiting our planet, what we humans are, what we do and how the world functions.
Dear aliens

Hi. my name is Robert.
I'm human being and nice to meet you aliens.
I would like to introduce us Human.

Human is one of the animal on this Earth planet, which is categorized in Mamal.
We have a head on the top part of our body, which makes us be available thinking by brain inside , and have two arm and leg Each, so we can move.

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Dear aliens

Hi.

mMy name is Robert.

I'm a human being and it's nice to meet you aliens.

I would like to introduce us Hyou to humanity.

HA human is one of the animals on this Earth planet, whiche call Earth, and is categorized in Maas a mammal.

We have a head on the top part of our body, which makes us be available thinking byallows us to think with the brain inside , and. We also have two arms and leg Each, sos so that we can move.

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Good job!

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Dear aliens

Hi.

mMy name is Robert.

I'm a human being and it's nice to meet you aliens.

In my opinion it would be better if this was two sentences since they have different topics:
I'm a human being. It's nice to meet you aliens.

I would like to introduce us Humans.

Human iss are one of the animals on this Earth planet, which is categorized inas Mammal.

A smoother way to write this would be:
Humans are a kind of animal on planet Earth. We are categorized as Mammals.

We have a head on the top part of our body, which makelets us be available think using bythe brain inside , and we have two arms and leg Es each, so we can move.

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I left the capitalizations because I thought it was a stylistic choice for the kind of writing but really if "human" or "mammal" is not at the beginning of a sentence it should be lowercase. Cute story!

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Hi.

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my name is Robert.

mMy name is Robert.

mMy name is Robert.

I'm human being and nice to meet you aliens.

I'm a human being and it's nice to meet you aliens.

In my opinion it would be better if this was two sentences since they have different topics: I'm a human being. It's nice to meet you aliens.

I'm a human being and it's nice to meet you aliens.

I would like to introduce us Human.

I would like to introduce us Humans.

I would like to introduce us Hyou to humanity.

Human is one of the animal on this Earth planet, which is categorized in Mamal.

Human iss are one of the animals on this Earth planet, which is categorized inas Mammal.

A smoother way to write this would be: Humans are a kind of animal on planet Earth. We are categorized as Mammals.

HA human is one of the animals on this Earth planet, whiche call Earth, and is categorized in Maas a mammal.

We have a head on the top part of our body, which makes us be available thinking by brain inside , and have two arm and leg Each, so we can move.

We have a head on the top part of our body, which makelets us be available think using bythe brain inside , and we have two arms and leg Es each, so we can move.

We have a head on the top part of our body, which makes us be available thinking byallows us to think with the brain inside , and. We also have two arms and leg Each, sos so that we can move.

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