Dec. 28, 2021
As a 27 years unmarried working woman, I am dealing with a lot of stress everyday. At my workplace, I am in charge of one big project that provide the 30% of turnover of the society I work for. It's a big responsability for me. Because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution. And make the project work properly.
Added to that, I have to take care of the house where I live. Like every grown up person, I have to clean and to keep the house tidy. Make groceries everyweek. Prepare meal for on a daily basis.
To deal with all the stresses, I have to be well organized. I anticipate everyday day as much as possible. So that when some unexpected problems happen at least I am mentally prepared.
Dealing with stress
This is ok. However, main titles usually have capital letters for most of their words, e.g. Dealing With Stress - or - Dealing with Stress. It is up to you, though. It's a style matter, really.
As a 27 years unmarried working woman, I am dealing with a lot of stress everyday.
If you say, "As a 27-years unmarried working woman" you could be meaning that you have been an unmarried working woman for 27 years. However, perhaps you mean that you are aged 27 years. If so, you could say for example, "As a 27-year-old unmarried working woman".
A note about "everyday"
If you mean that you suffer stress each day, then the usual form is to write "every day" as two separate words, just as you write "each day" as two separate words. Here, you are using "every day" as a time phrase: it is an adverb. I think that this is what you are meaning here. However, the joined-up form, "everyday", is an adjective. It is used to describe something as ordinary, common, routine, the usual, etc. For example, "Fighting fires and rescuing people was just an everyday job for him" - and - "Living in poverty is an everyday fact of life for the people of that country".
A note about "a lot"
The phrase "a lot" is used commonly and serves the English language well on an everyday (!!) basis. However, there are alternatives that could be used for variety, for example - much; a great amount of.
At my workplace, I am in charge of one big project that provide thes 30% of the turnover of the society I work for.
It's a big responsaibility for me.
responsibility
Because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution.
It is quite common in informal English to begin a sentence with "because", especially in speech. It is, however, grammatically incorrect! This is because "because" is a joining word usually better placed within the same sentence that prompts its use. So, you could join the above sentence, and this one here like this: "It's a big responsibility for me because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution." I think this helps your text to flow a bit better.
And make the project work properly.
Following on from what I've said above, "and" is also a joining word, and it could be used within the same sentence, thus avoiding unnecessary breaking up of the text flow. So, "It's a big responsibility for me because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution and make the project work."
Added to that, I have to take care of the house where I live.
Like every grown -up person, I have to clean and to keep the house tidy.
Like every grown-up person, I have to clean and keep the house tidy.
MakeFetch groceries every week.
Thinking about what I've said above, try to connect this sentence with the one above and the one below, without the use of full stops (periods). For example: "Like every grown-up person, I have to clean and keep the house tidy, fetch groceries every week and prepare meals on a daily basis."
Prepare meal fors on a daily basis.
as above
To deal with all the stresses, I have to be well organized.
I anticipate everydayach day as much as possible.
I anticipate each day as much as possible.
So that when some unexpected problems happen at least I am mentally prepared.
You could join up the sentence above with this one, for example: "I anticipate each day as much as possible, so that when some unexpected problem happens, at least I'm mentally prepared."
Feedback
I understood everything you wrote. I have just provided some suggestions that you might like to consider. However, writing is a personal thing and ultimately what matters is how you, yourself, want to express yourself. I hope this has been of some help to you.
Sincerely,
mjm
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Dealing with stress Dealing with stress This is ok. However, main titles usually have capital letters for most of their words, e.g. Dealing With Stress - or - Dealing with Stress. It is up to you, though. It's a style matter, really. |
As a 27 years unmarried working woman, I am dealing with a lot of stress everyday. As a 27 year As a 27 years unmarried working woman, I am dealing with a lot of stress everyday. If you say, "As a 27-years unmarried working woman" you could be meaning that you have been an unmarried working woman for 27 years. However, perhaps you mean that you are aged 27 years. If so, you could say for example, "As a 27-year-old unmarried working woman". A note about "everyday" If you mean that you suffer stress each day, then the usual form is to write "every day" as two separate words, just as you write "each day" as two separate words. Here, you are using "every day" as a time phrase: it is an adverb. I think that this is what you are meaning here. However, the joined-up form, "everyday", is an adjective. It is used to describe something as ordinary, common, routine, the usual, etc. For example, "Fighting fires and rescuing people was just an everyday job for him" - and - "Living in poverty is an everyday fact of life for the people of that country". A note about "a lot" The phrase "a lot" is used commonly and serves the English language well on an everyday (!!) basis. However, there are alternatives that could be used for variety, for example - much; a great amount of. |
At my workplace, I am in charge of one big project that provide the 30% of turnover of the society I work for. At my workplace, I am in charge of one big project that provide Does turnover refer to loss of employees? Or profit? Turnover generally refers to the number of people that leave the company. At my workplace, I am in charge of one big project that provide |
It's a big responsability for me. It's a big respons It's a big respons responsibility |
Because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution. Because whenever there is an issue Because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution. It is quite common in informal English to begin a sentence with "because", especially in speech. It is, however, grammatically incorrect! This is because "because" is a joining word usually better placed within the same sentence that prompts its use. So, you could join the above sentence, and this one here like this: "It's a big responsibility for me because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution." I think this helps your text to flow a bit better. |
And make the project work properly. And make the project work properly. Following on from what I've said above, "and" is also a joining word, and it could be used within the same sentence, thus avoiding unnecessary breaking up of the text flow. So, "It's a big responsibility for me because whenever an issue comes to this project, it is my call to give a solution and make the project work." |
Added to that, I have to take care of the house where I live.
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Like every grown up person, I have to clean and to keep the house tidy. Like every grown up person, I have to clean and Like every grown Like every grown-up person, I have to clean and keep the house tidy. |
Make groceries everyweek.
Thinking about what I've said above, try to connect this sentence with the one above and the one below, without the use of full stops (periods). For example: "Like every grown-up person, I have to clean and keep the house tidy, fetch groceries every week and prepare meals on a daily basis." |
Prepare meal for on a daily basis. Prepare meal Prepare meal as above |
To deal with all the stresses, I have to be well organized. To deal with all This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I anticipate everyday day as much as possible. I I anticipate e I anticipate each day as much as possible. |
So that when some unexpected problems happen at least I am mentally prepared. So that when some unexpected problems happen at least I am mentally prepared. You could join up the sentence above with this one, for example: "I anticipate each day as much as possible, so that when some unexpected problem happens, at least I'm mentally prepared." |
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