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Today was an amazing day I went to school, I took the breakfast with my friends and had a good time thogeter, I have already take a shower and eaten some cookies with milk, I also think that the most important part of the day is I when you take a break and rest a little to recover your energy and continue with you´re day, because if you are exhausted and tired you wont enjoy the rest of you´re day. Thank you.
Este de día fue fantástico, fui a la escuela, desayuné con mis amigos y disfrutamos el tiempo junto, ya he tomado un baño y comido algunas galletas con leche, yo también pienso que la parte más importante del día es cuando te tomas un tiempo y recobras tu energía para continuar con día, ya que si estas exhausto y cansado no vas a disfrutar el resto de tu día. Gracias.
Today was an amazing day; I went to school, I took thhad some breakfast with my friends and we had a good time thogether, and I have already taken a shower and eaten some cookies with milk,. I also think that the most important part of the day is I when you take a break and rest a little to recover your energy and continue with you´rer day, because if you are exhausted and tired you won't enjoy the rest of you´rer day.
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The original sentence is correct, but could come off as a little confrontational. The correction is to make it sound more polite.
Today was an amazing day: I went to school, I took thehad a great time eating breakfast with my friends and had a good time thogeter, I haved already taken a shower and I had eaten some cookies with milk,. I also think that the most important part of the day is I when you take a break and rest a little to recover your energy and continue with you´rer day, because if you are exhausted and tired you won't enjoy the rest of you´rer day.
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Today was an amazing day. I went to school, I took the and then I had breakfast with my friends and. We had a good time thogether, I have already takeook a shower and eaten some cookies with milk,. I also think that the most important part of the day is I when you take a break and rest a little to recover your energy and continue with you´rer day, because if you are exhausted and tired you won't enjoy the rest of you´rer day.
This is one long run-on sentence so I broke it up into many different sentences.
Your = possessive pronoun, refers to something that belongs to you
You're = you are
^This is confusing for some native English speakers!
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Correct me if you want, thank you This sentence has been marked as perfect! Correct me if you The original sentence is correct, but could come off as a little confrontational. The correction is to make it sound more polite. |
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Today was an amazing day I went to school, I took the breakfast with my friends and had a good time thogeter, I have already take a shower and eaten some cookies with milk, I also think that the most important part of the day is I when you take a break and rest a little to recover your energy and continue with you´re day, because if you are exhausted and tired you wont enjoy the rest of you´re day. Today was an amazing day. I went to school This is one long run-on sentence so I broke it up into many different sentences. Your = possessive pronoun, refers to something that belongs to you You're = you are ^This is confusing for some native English speakers! Today was an amazing day: I went to school, I Today was an amazing day; I went to school, I |
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