March 10, 2021
滑雪
滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象吧。虽然我城市以冲浪有名，我还是不会冲浪，但将来我打算学到。我终于会冲浪后，才可以尝试一下滑雪。
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滑雪
滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象脚上动作应该和滑旱冰很像吧。
滑双板的脚上动作应该和滑旱冰很像吧。
虽然我的城市以冲浪有而著名，我还是不会冲浪，但将来我打算将来学到。
虽然我的城市以冲浪而著名，我还是不会冲浪，但我打算将来学。
我终于当我学会冲浪后，才可以再尝试一下滑雪。
当我学会冲浪后，再尝试一下滑雪。
It's not appropriate to use 才 here. The meaning of this sentence becomes "Only when I finally learn surfing, can I try skiing."
在我学会冲浪后，再尝试一下滑雪。After I learned how to surf, I tried to learn how to ski.
March 10, 2021
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滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象吧。
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虽然我城市以冲浪有名，我还是不会冲浪，但将来我打算学到。
虽然我的城市以冲浪 |
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滑雪 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我终于会冲浪后，才可以尝试一下滑雪。
It's not appropriate to use 才 here. The meaning of this sentence becomes "Only when I finally learn surfing, can I try skiing." 在我学会冲浪后，再尝试一下滑雪。After I learned how to surf, I tried to learn how to ski. |
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