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Jan. 26, 2026

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what gives me meaning in life

כשחשבתי על מה יתן לי ספוק בחיי אמרתי בלבי שהוא לעזור לאחרים


when I thought about what will give me meaning in life I thought to myself that it is helping others

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what gives me meaning in life

כשחשבתי על מה יתן לי סיפוק בחיי אמרתי בלבי שהואזה יהיה לעזור לאחרים

Writing ספוק is also okay, but without nikud it's better to write סיפוק.
The phrase אמרתי בלבי is correct, but very not daily - it's more than "thought to myself" which is חשבתי לעצמי, and closer to "I've understood and decided" kind of phrase.
You need to add the יהיה, to say that at the moment you thought about it, you understood that it will give you that future meaning you're looking for

what gives me meaning in life


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כשחשבתי על מה יתן לי ספוק בחיי אמרתי בלבי שהוא לעזור לאחרים


כשחשבתי על מה יתן לי סיפוק בחיי אמרתי בלבי שהואזה יהיה לעזור לאחרים

Writing ספוק is also okay, but without nikud it's better to write סיפוק. The phrase אמרתי בלבי is correct, but very not daily - it's more than "thought to myself" which is חשבתי לעצמי, and closer to "I've understood and decided" kind of phrase. You need to add the יהיה, to say that at the moment you thought about it, you understood that it will give you that future meaning you're looking for

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