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milapila2706

March 23, 2024

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Days before classes

I started this week with sadness and frustration. I was supposed to attend curses with the teachers I had chosen previously but that didn't happen. The thing is that the matrícula process in my university is hell. The web page as always was super slow. Now, I'm with a teacher I don't like in one important curse for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo". I still don't believe what happened.

Then, I was starting an almost personal proyect: a short film. It's my first time as a director and there are many thing I don't know. However, I'm very happy for this challenge. The first thing I have to do is create a guion.

Apart from that, I have been preparing everything for the startling of my classes. I pretend to continue tutoring to gain a bite of money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses. Also, I want to do other things, like cursed or keep going to the gym. Therefore, I am creating a perfect schedule for me.

So I am very excited and at the same time anxious of all the things I want to do this fifth ciclo académico to be one of the five best students. And, I want to see again all of my classmates and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.

Thanks for reading

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Days before classes

I started this week with sadness and frustration.

I was supposed to attend curlasses with the teachers I had chosen previously, but that didn't happen.

The thing is that the matrícula process in my university is hell.

The web page as always was super slow.

Now, I'm with a teacher whose teaching I don't like in onean important curselass for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".

I still docan't believe what happened.

Then, I was starting an almost personal proyject: a short film.

It's my first time as a director and there awere many thing I doidn't know.

However, I'm very happy for this challenge.

The first thing I have to do is create a guionscript for the short film.

Apart from that, I have been preparing everythingall the other material required for the startling of my classes.

I pretend to continue tutoring to gain a bite of money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.

Therefore, I am creating a perfect schedule for me.

So I am very excited, and , at the same time anxious because of all the things I want to do this fifth "ciclo académico" to be one of the five best students.

And, I want to see again all of my classmates again and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.

Thanks for reading

I started this week with sadness and frustration.

I was supposed to attend curlasses with the teachers I had chosen previously but that didn't happen.

You probably meant "courses" (not curses) :-) but in English we tend to say "attend classes"

The thing is that the matrícularegistration process in my university is hell.

The web page as always was super slow.

Now, I'm with a teacher I don't like in one important curselass for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".

Por favor, no confundas course (=curso) with curse (=maldición; mala palabra) :-)

I still don't believe what happened.

Then, I was starting an almost personal proyject: a short film.

It's my first time as a director and there are many thing I don't know.

However, I'm very happy forwith this challenge.

The first thing I have to do is create a guionscript.

Apart from that, I have been preparing everything for the startling of my classes.

I preintend to continue tutoring to gain a bite of money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.

Also, I want to do other things, like cursed(?) or keep going to the gym.

Therefore, I am creating a perfect schedule for meyself.

So I am very excited and at the same time anxious ofabout all the things I want to do this fifth ciclo acadéemico year to be one of the five best/top students.

And, I want to see again all of my classmates and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.

Thanks for reading

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Good luck on your short film project!

I was supposed to attend courses with the teachers I had chosen previously, but that didn't happen.

The thichallenge is that the matríiculation process in my university is hell.

The web pages asre always was super slow.

Now, I'm scheduled to take a class with a teacher I that I don't like in one important curse for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".

I still don'can’t believe what happened.

ThenAt the time, I was starting an almost personal proytect: of a short film.

It's will be my first time as a director and there are many things that I don't know.

However, I'm very happy forto take on this challenge.

The first thing I that have to do is create a guion. (??).

Apart from that, I have been preparing everything for the startling of my classes.

I pretend toam continueing to tutoring to gain a bite ofearn money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.

Also, I want to do other things, like courseds or keep going to the gym.

So I am very excited and at the same time anxious due tof all the things I want to doaccomplish this fifth ciclo académicosemester to be one of the five besttop students.

Andlso, I want to see again all of my classmates again and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.

Feedback

No entendí algunos de las frases.

So I am very excited and at the same time anxious of all the things I want to do this fifth ciclo académico to be one of the five best students.


So I am very excited and at the same time anxious due tof all the things I want to doaccomplish this fifth ciclo académicosemester to be one of the five besttop students.

So I am very excited and at the same time anxious ofabout all the things I want to do this fifth ciclo acadéemico year to be one of the five best/top students.

So I am very excited, and , at the same time anxious because of all the things I want to do this fifth "ciclo académico" to be one of the five best students.

Thanks for reading


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I started this week with sadness and frustration.


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Then, I was starting an almost personal proyect: a short film.


ThenAt the time, I was starting an almost personal proytect: of a short film.

Then, I was starting an almost personal proyject: a short film.

Then, I was starting an almost personal proyject: a short film.

It's my first time as a director and there are many thing I don't know.


It's will be my first time as a director and there are many things that I don't know.

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It's my first time as a director and there awere many thing I doidn't know.

However, I'm very happy for this challenge.


However, I'm very happy forto take on this challenge.

However, I'm very happy forwith this challenge.

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The first thing I have to do is create a guion.


The first thing I that have to do is create a guion. (??).

The first thing I have to do is create a guionscript.

The first thing I have to do is create a guionscript for the short film.

Apart from that, I have been preparing everything for the startling of my classes.


Apart from that, I have been preparing everything for the startling of my classes.

Apart from that, I have been preparing everything for the startling of my classes.

Apart from that, I have been preparing everythingall the other material required for the startling of my classes.

I pretend to continue tutoring to gain a bite of money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.


I pretend toam continueing to tutoring to gain a bite ofearn money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.

I preintend to continue tutoring to gain a bite of money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.

I pretend to continue tutoring to gain a bite of money for my studying needs and to help my family with some expenses.

Also, I want to do other things, like cursed or keep going to the gym.


Also, I want to do other things, like courseds or keep going to the gym.

Also, I want to do other things, like cursed(?) or keep going to the gym.

I was supposed to attend curses with the teachers I had chosen previously but that didn't happen.


I was supposed to attend courses with the teachers I had chosen previously, but that didn't happen.

I was supposed to attend curlasses with the teachers I had chosen previously but that didn't happen.

You probably meant "courses" (not curses) :-) but in English we tend to say "attend classes"

I was supposed to attend curlasses with the teachers I had chosen previously, but that didn't happen.

The thing is that the matrícula process in my university is hell.


The thichallenge is that the matríiculation process in my university is hell.

The thing is that the matrícularegistration process in my university is hell.

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The web page as always was super slow.


The web pages asre always was super slow.

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Now, I'm with a teacher I don't like in one important curse for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".


Now, I'm scheduled to take a class with a teacher I that I don't like in one important curse for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".

Now, I'm with a teacher I don't like in one important curselass for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".

Por favor, no confundas course (=curso) with curse (=maldición; mala palabra) :-)

Now, I'm with a teacher whose teaching I don't like in onean important curselass for me, "Taller de Periodismo Informativo".

I still don't believe what happened.


I still don'can’t believe what happened.

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I still docan't believe what happened.

Therefore, I am creating a perfect schedule for me.


Therefore, I am creating a perfect schedule for meyself.

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And, I want to see again all of my classmates and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.


Andlso, I want to see again all of my classmates again and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And, I want to see again all of my classmates again and improve my social skills to feel more comfortable attending classes.

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