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This morning, I took out the dough I had kneaded yesterday from the refrigerator. It had doubled in size and had a good fermented aroma. I put it on the table and waited for it to come back to room temperature. Then I sprinkled a little flour on the top of the dough, divided it into six pieces, shaped them, let them have a second rise, and preheated the oven to 220℃. When the oven was ready, I sprayed some water onto the dough and placed them in the oven. After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful bread came out. They had risen well and developed a deep golden brown crust. That will be my sandwich bread.
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This morning, I took out the dough I had kneaded yesterday from the refrigerator.
"the dough I kneaded yesterday..." is equally correct.
It had doubled in size and had a good fermented aroma.
"It doubled in size and had a good fermented aroma" is also correct (and it sounds less redundant).
I put it on the table and waited for it to come back to room temperature.
Then I sprinkled a little flour on the top of the dough, divided it into six pieces, shaped themeach one/piece, let them havrise a second ristime, and preheated the oven to 220℃.
For some reason, "shaped them" doesn't quite sound right to me in this context. I can't put my finger on it (I don't know why).
When the oven was ready, I sprayed some water onto the dough and placed them in the ovenside.
The second "oven" is redundant
After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful tray of bread came out.
"After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful breads (plural) came out." also sounds correct to me, while "After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful bread came out." does not. I don't know why that is.
They had risen well and developed a deep golden brown crust.
That will be my sandwich bread.
"This will be my sandwich bread." sounds equally correct.
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Great Job! There were a lot of corrections/suggestions that I made that were based solely on "feel", that I wasn't able to give an explanation for. I'm sorry for that.
Day 14
This morning, I took out the dough I had kneaded yesterday fromout of the refrigerator.
A bit more natural
It had doubled in size and had a good fermented aromaaroma of fermentation.
What you wrote would pass, but I would prefer this (since the dough was fermented, not the air/aroma)
I put it on the table and waited for it to come back to room temperature.
Then I sprinkled a little flour on the top of the dough, divided it into six pieces, shaped them, let them have a second rise, and preheated the oven to 220℃.
When the oven was ready, I sprayed some water onto the doughloaves/rolls and placed them in the oven.
Writing "dough" would need "it" rather than "them." Since you finished shaping the dough and the final rest was done, I would just refer to whatever the name the final product is (e.g., loaves of bread, rolls - depends on what you made)
After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful bread loaves/rolls came out.
I would expect to see a more specific name here
They had risen well and developed a deep golden -brown crust.
Thatis will be my sandwich bread.
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Great job. Fresh bread is so delicious
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This morning, I took out the dough I had kneaded yesterday from the refrigerator. This morning, I took out the dough I had kneaded yesterday A bit more natural This morning, I took out the dough I had kneaded yesterday from the refrigerator. "the dough I kneaded yesterday..." is equally correct. |
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It had doubled in size and had a good fermented aroma. It had doubled in size and had a good What you wrote would pass, but I would prefer this (since the dough was fermented, not the air/aroma) It had doubled in size and had a good fermented aroma. "It doubled in size and had a good fermented aroma" is also correct (and it sounds less redundant). |
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I put it on the table and waited for it to come back to room temperature. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then I sprinkled a little flour on the top of the dough, divided it into six pieces, shaped them, let them have a second rise, and preheated the oven to 220℃. Then I sprinkled a little flour on Then I sprinkled a little flour on the top of the dough, divided it into six pieces, shaped For some reason, "shaped them" doesn't quite sound right to me in this context. I can't put my finger on it (I don't know why). |
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When the oven was ready, I sprayed some water onto the dough and placed them in the oven. When the oven was ready, I sprayed some water onto the Writing "dough" would need "it" rather than "them." Since you finished shaping the dough and the final rest was done, I would just refer to whatever the name the final product is (e.g., loaves of bread, rolls - depends on what you made) When the oven was ready, I sprayed some water onto the dough and placed them in The second "oven" is redundant |
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After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful bread came out. After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful bread loaves/rolls came out. I would expect to see a more specific name here After 20 minutes, a "After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful breads (plural) came out." also sounds correct to me, while "After 20 minutes, a tray of beautiful bread came out." does not. I don't know why that is. |
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They had risen well and developed a deep golden brown crust. They had risen well and developed a deep golden This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That will be my sandwich bread. Th That will be my sandwich bread. "This will be my sandwich bread." sounds equally correct. |
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