Jan. 2, 2025
Day1 practice
The man is standing on the balcony and looking around. He notices that there is nothing around him, not even a single flower. So, he decides to go to a flower shop and buy some. Now, he is back on the balcony, smelling the flowers. He feels happy.
Day1 practice
The man is standing on the balcony and looking around.
He notices that there is nothing around him, not even a single flower.
So, he decides to go to a flower shop and buy some.
Now, he is back on the balcony, smelling the flowers.
He feels happy.
The man is standings on the balcony and lookings around.
Original sentence is technically correct, but this version flows better with the rest of the story.
He notices that there is nothing around him, not even a single flower.
So, he decides to go to a flower shop and buy some.
Now, he is back on the balcony, smelling the flowers.
He feels happy.
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Lovely little story! All correct, only extremely minor change to first sentence for improved flow.
Day 1 practice
The man is standing on the balcony and is looking around.
He notices that there is nothing around him, not even a single flower.
So, he decides to go to a flower shop and buy some.
Now, he is back on the balcony, smelling the flowers.
He feels happy.
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Day1 practice Day 1 practice Day 1 practice This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The man is standing on the balcony and looking around. The man is standing on the balcony and is looking around. The man Original sentence is technically correct, but this version flows better with the rest of the story. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He notices that there is nothing around him, not even a single flower. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, he decides to go to a flower shop and buy some. So, he decides to go to a flower shop This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now, he is back on the balcony, smelling the flowers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He feels happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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