Nov. 10, 2023
Day Twelve: Jordan Trip Part Four
After the beach, we booked some trips to the Wadi Rum desert and Petra. There weren't funny stories so I'll tell only that these places were the first time when I didn't feel that someone watching me. There were only men and they acted like I used to men act around women. By the way, in Petra, men looked like Captain Jack Sparrow with tangled hair, eyeliners, and a recognizable beard and mustache.
In the evening, we met with my band from the second part, (P, N, E, T, S, and I) for sort I'll call us PENIST, (I hope I won't get banned) near the swimming pool. We were talking, sharing news and pictures, and drinking, of course.
For this time, one 30-35-year-old woman from a previous arrival joined us. She belongs to the group that arrived a few weeks earlier and should have been going back in a few days.
And this is her story.
She traveled alone and met a local guy. They went on a date a few times, nothing serious just a good time while she was here. One day, she noticed kid clothes in the car, and the guy told her that it was his nephew's stuff. She decides that it is not her business. Later on, she went to the tour's office to book a trip to the desert and met that guy. She greeted him, and he answered kind of coldly and left. The woman who worked there asked her how she knew him, and she pretended she was mistaken.
The tour woman tried to convince her to tell the truth because this guy was married to her friend and they had a kid.
The hotel staff who worked in the cafeteria near the swimming pool were leaving and asked us to switch off the lights when we were done drinking. One day, I asked a staff guy's name because I am friendly, and additionally, I was pretty tipsy. I thought if they asked to switch off the lights every day, it would be polite to know their names. I didn't expect that it would lead to an unexpected result.
There weren't funny stories, so I'll tell only that these places were the first time whenthat I didn't feel thatlike someone was watching me.
There were only men and they acted like Ithe way I am used to men acting around women.
In the evening, we met with my band from the second part, (P, N, E, T, S, and I) near the swimming pool; for short I'll call us PENIST, (I hope I won't get banned) near the swimming pool.
For tThis time, one 30-35-year-old woman from a previous arrivalwho was here before us joined us.
She belongs to the group that arrived a few weeks earlier, and should have beenbe going back in a few days.
They went on a date a few times,few dates; it was nothing serious, just a good time while she was here.
Later on, she went to the tour's office to book a trip to the desert and met that guy there.
I didn't expect that it would lead to ansomething unexpected result.
Day Twelve: Jordan Trip Part Four
After the beach, we booked some trips to the Wadi Rum desert and Petra.
There weren't (any) funny stories so I'll tellsay only that these places were the first time when I didn't feel thatlike someone was watching me.
There were only men and they acted like I'm used to men acting around women.
By the way, in Petra, some men looked like Captain Jack Sparrow with tangled hair, eyeliners, and a recognizable beard and mustache.
In the evening, we met with my band from the second part, (P, N, E, T, S, and I) for sort I'll call us PENIST, (I hope I won't get banned) near the swimming pool.
We were talking, sharing news and pictures, and drinking, of course.
For this time, one 30-35-year-old woman from a previous arrival joined us.
She belongs to the group that arrived a few weeks earlier and should have been going back in a few days.
And this is her story.
She traveled alone and met a local guy.
They went on a date a few timdates, nothing serious just a good time while she was here.
One day, she noticed kid's clothes in thehis car, and the guy told her that it was his nephew's stuff.
She decidesd that it iwas notne of her business.
Later on, she went to the tour's office to book a trip to the desert and metran into that guy.
"Ran into" implies they met unintentionally.
She greeted him, and he answered kind of coldly and left.
The woman who worked there asked her how she knew him, and she pretended she was mistaken.
The tour woman tried to convince her to tell the truth because this guy was married to her friend and they had a kid.
The hotel staff who worked in the cafeteria near the swimming pool were leaving and asked us to switch off the lights when we were done drinking.
One day, I asked a staff guy's name because I am friendly, and additionally, I was pretty tipsy.
I thought if they asked us to switch off the lights every day, it would be polite to know their names.
I didn't expect that it would lead to an unexpectede result.
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After the beach, we booked some trips to the Wadi Rum desert and Petra. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There weren't funny stories so I'll tell only that these places were the first time when I didn't feel that someone watching me. There weren't (any) funny stories so I'll There weren't funny stories, so I'll tell only that these places were the first time |
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There were only men and they acted like I used to men act around women. There were only men and they acted like I'm used to men acting around women. There were only men and they acted |
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By the way, in Petra, men looked like Captain Jack Sparrow with tangled hair, eyeliners, and a recognizable beard and mustache. By the way, in Petra, some men looked like Captain Jack Sparrow with tangled hair, eyeliner |
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In the evening, we met with my band from the second part, (P, N, E, T, S, and I) for sort I'll call us PENIST, (I hope I won't get banned) near the swimming pool. In the evening, we met with my band from the second part, (P, N, E, T, S, and I) In the evening, we met with my band from the second part, (P, N, E, T, S, and I) near the swimming pool; for short I'll call us PENIST, (I hope I won't get banned) |
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We were talking, sharing news and pictures, and drinking, of course. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For this time, one 30-35-year-old woman from a previous arrival joined us. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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She belongs to the group that arrived a few weeks earlier and should have been going back in a few days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She belongs to the group that arrived a few weeks earlier, and should |
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And this is her story. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She traveled alone and met a local guy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They went on a date a few times, nothing serious just a good time while she was here. They went on a They went on a |
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One day, she noticed kid clothes in the car, and the guy told her that it was his nephew's stuff. One day, she noticed kid's clothes in |
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She decides that it is not her business. She decide |
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Later on, she went to the tour's office to book a trip to the desert and met that guy. Later on, she went to the tour "Ran into" implies they met unintentionally. Later on, she went to the tour |
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She greeted him, and he answered kind of coldly and left. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The woman who worked there asked her how she knew him, and she pretended she was mistaken. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The tour woman tried to convince her to tell the truth because this guy was married to her friend and they had a kid. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The hotel staff who worked in the cafeteria near the swimming pool were leaving and asked us to switch off the lights when we were done drinking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One day, I asked a staff guy's name because I am friendly, and additionally, I was pretty tipsy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought if they asked to switch off the lights every day, it would be polite to know their names. I thought if they asked us to switch off the lights every day, it would be polite to know their names. |
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I didn't expect that it would lead to an unexpected result. I didn't expect th I didn't expect that it would lead to |
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