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Oct. 19, 2023

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Day three

About progress and how to track it.
It is a big pleasure when you can see the progress of your hard work. I wish I had a progress bar under the head it would give me additional motivation. Or I could open an achievement tab and check what should I do to get an achievement "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".

Unfortunately, I am not into the videogames so I should think of ways to encourage myself.
One of them is this everyday diary. I hope I can write a small text within a month.
The second one is the hardest - video essays. It is best if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling when I listen to my voice sound. The side effect of video speeches - increasing confidence and presentation skills.

I used to read English articles and add new words to the flashcard app to repeat them. I am tired of this practice because either I don't have time to repeat or I have nothing to repeat. And even if I learned these words there is a small chance I use them in a dialog.
But I can combine two practices - learning new words and writing texts. For example, select 5-7 new words from the dictionary and by all means use them in the text.

Corrections

Day tThree: About progress and how to track it.

About progress and how to track it.

Combine like above to make a title. A title should (almost) always be on one line.

It is a big pleasureso rewarding when you can see the progress of your hard work.

Or "It is so fulfilling" / "It is amazing"

I wish I had a progress bar under themy head ithat would give me additional motivation.

Or I could open an achievement tab and check what should I do to get an achievement, like "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".

Unfortunately, I am not into the video games so I should think of other ways to encourage myself.

One of them is this everyday diary.

I hope I can write (a small text within alittle each day / a little each month).

It is the best kind of practice if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech, but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling I get when I listen to the sound of my voice sound.

Th(But / However), the positive side effect of video speeches -is increasinged confidence and presentation skills.

I used to read English articles and add new words to thea flashcard app to repeatdrill them.

I am tired of this practice because either I don't have timhe to repeatime or I have nothing to repeatdrill.

And even if I learned theose words there is a small chance I will use them in a dialog.

But I can combine two (types of / kinds of) practices - learning new words and writing texts.

For example, select 5-7 new words from the dictionary and by all means use them in the texttry to use them all in your writing.

Or "five to seven / 5 to seven"

I wish I had a progress bar under themy head ithat would give me additional motivation.

Yours still makes sense. This just sounds more natural.

Or I could open an achievement tab and check what I should I do to get an achievement "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".

Word order.

Unfortunately, I am not into the video games, so I should think of ways to encourage myself.

Removed "the" as it implies a specific video game, not all video games (two words, not one).

One of them is this everydaily diary.

Sounds more natural.

It is best if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech, but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling when I listen to the sound of my voice sound.

"the sound of X".
"Voice sound" was understandable, but incorrect and sounded really unnatural.

And even if I learned these words there is a small chance I use them in a dialogue.

Dialog = a kind of information screen on a computer (American English)
Dialogue = a conversation (American and British English)

Feedback

Fantastic work, I mostly corrected just to make it sound more natural. No major mistakes.

Also, I like your writing. It's funny, and I like the way you're learning.

Day three


Day tThree: About progress and how to track it.

About progress and how to track it.


About progress and how to track it.

Combine like above to make a title. A title should (almost) always be on one line.

It is a big pleasure when you can see the progress of your hard work.


It is a big pleasureso rewarding when you can see the progress of your hard work.

Or "It is so fulfilling" / "It is amazing"

I wish I had a progress bar under the head it would give me additional motivation.


I wish I had a progress bar under themy head ithat would give me additional motivation.

Yours still makes sense. This just sounds more natural.

I wish I had a progress bar under themy head ithat would give me additional motivation.

Or I could open an achievement tab and check what should I do to get an achievement "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".


Or I could open an achievement tab and check what I should I do to get an achievement "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".

Word order.

Or I could open an achievement tab and check what should I do to get an achievement, like "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".

Unfortunately, I am not into the videogames so I should think of ways to encourage myself.


Unfortunately, I am not into the video games, so I should think of ways to encourage myself.

Removed "the" as it implies a specific video game, not all video games (two words, not one).

Unfortunately, I am not into the video games so I should think of other ways to encourage myself.

One of them is this everyday diary.


One of them is this everydaily diary.

Sounds more natural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope I can write a small text within a month.


I hope I can write (a small text within alittle each day / a little each month).

The second one is the hardest - video essays.


It is best if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling when I listen to my voice sound.


It is best if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech, but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling when I listen to the sound of my voice sound.

"the sound of X". "Voice sound" was understandable, but incorrect and sounded really unnatural.

It is the best kind of practice if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech, but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling I get when I listen to the sound of my voice sound.

The side effect of video speeches - increasing confidence and presentation skills.


Th(But / However), the positive side effect of video speeches -is increasinged confidence and presentation skills.

I used to read English articles and add new words to the flashcard app to repeat them.


I used to read English articles and add new words to thea flashcard app to repeatdrill them.

I am tired of this practice because either I don't have time to repeat or I have nothing to repeat.


I am tired of this practice because either I don't have timhe to repeatime or I have nothing to repeatdrill.

And even if I learned these words there is a small chance I use them in a dialog.


And even if I learned these words there is a small chance I use them in a dialogue.

Dialog = a kind of information screen on a computer (American English) Dialogue = a conversation (American and British English)

And even if I learned theose words there is a small chance I will use them in a dialog.

But I can combine two practices - learning new words and writing texts.


But I can combine two (types of / kinds of) practices - learning new words and writing texts.

For example, select 5-7 new words from the dictionary and by all means use them in the text.


For example, select 5-7 new words from the dictionary and by all means use them in the texttry to use them all in your writing.

Or "five to seven / 5 to seven"

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