Nov. 7, 2023
Day ten: Jordan Trip Part One
A long time ago, before the covid-19, my friend and I had been visiting Jordan. For me, it was a harsh time. I had some confrontations with my boss and wasn't able to think up where to go and travel plan, therefore, I agreed with her idea about Jordan.
We went to the airport right from the office and my mind still was at work. I remember we were staying in line for check-in, and I started to realize, that we were surrounded by senior people.
- "Why are we only 20+ years old here?" - I asked her. - "Is this a kinda resort for old people? Why are we going to a place where old people rest?"
Well, I imagined it quite differently like a hotel full of young people, parties, alcohol, and swimming for the whole night.
Yes, I knew that is it a Muslim country and there were strict rules, but in my twenties, I thought there would be slightly different rules for foreigners.
Anyway, at that moment I started to think that we wouldn't make new friends and it's going to be the most boring traveling ever.
I'll skip the part about how they put us on the plane, how we arrived and passed all the controls. Let's jump right over to the moment when we start feeling that something is off.
The first red flag was when we were waiting in the shadows for the rest of the people who were coming to the buses that were going to ride us to the hotel. It was April. It was cold in Russia, so I was wearing jeans, and a long slave shirt my friend (from now on I'll call her T) had something similar. It was a bit hot so we decided that bus drivers look at us and smile because of our clothes. We didn't pay much attention to such odd behavior.
Day ten: Jordan Trip Part One
A long time ago, before the covidCOVID-19, my friend and I had been visiting Jordan.
For me, it was a harsh time.
I had some confrontations with my boss and wasn't able to think up where to go andor travel plan, t. Therefore, I agreed with her idea about Jordan.
We went to the airport right from the office and, but my mind was still was at work.
I remember we were staynding in line for check-in, and I started to realize, that we were surrounded by senior people.
- "Why are we the only 20+ -something-years -olds here?"
20+ would include seniors.
- I asked her.
- "Is this a kinda resort for old people?
Why are we going to a place where old people resn old people vacation spot?"
Well, I had imagined it quite differently, like a hotel full of young people, parties, alcohol, and swimming for the wholthrough the night.
Yes, I knew that ist its a Muslim country and there weare strict rules, but in my twenties, I thought there would be slightly different rules for foreigners.
Anyway, at that moment I started to think that we wouldn't make new friends and it' was going to be the most boring travelingip ever.
I'll skip the part about how they put us on the plane, how we arrived and passed all the controlthrough customs.
Let's jump right over to the moment when we start feeling that something is off.
The first red flag was when we were waiting in the shadows for the rest of the people who were coming to the buses that were going to ridtake us to the hotel.
It washad been cold in Russia, so I was wearing jeans, and a long slaeeve shirt, and my friend (from now on I'll call her T) had something similar.
It was a bit hot so we decidedthought that the bus drivers were looking at us and smileing because of our clothes.
We didn't pay much attention to such odd behavior.
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Day ten: Jordan Trip Part One This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A long time ago, before the covid-19, my friend and I had been visiting Jordan. A long time ago, before |
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For me, it was a harsh time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had some confrontations with my boss and wasn't able to think up where to go and travel plan, therefore, I agreed with her idea about Jordan. I had some confrontations with my boss and wasn't able to think up where to go |
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We went to the airport right from the office and my mind still was at work. We went to the airport right from the office |
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I remember we were staying in line for check-in, and I started to realize, that we were surrounded by senior people. I remember we were sta |
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- "Why are we only 20+ years old here?" - "Why are we the only 20 20+ would include seniors. |
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- I asked her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- "Is this a kinda resort for old people? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why are we going to a place where old people rest?" Why are we going to a |
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Well, I imagined it quite differently like a hotel full of young people, parties, alcohol, and swimming for the whole night. Well, I had imagined it quite differently, like a hotel full of young people, parties, alcohol, and swimming |
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Yes, I knew that is it a Muslim country and there were strict rules, but in my twenties, I thought there would be slightly different rules for foreigners. Yes, I knew that i |
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Anyway, at that moment I started to think that we wouldn't make new friends and it's going to be the most boring traveling ever. Anyway, at that moment I started to think that we wouldn't make new friends and it |
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I'll skip the part about how they put us on the plane, how we arrived and passed all the controls. I'll skip the part about how they put us on the plane, how we arrived and passed |
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Let's jump right over to the moment when we start feeling that something is off. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first red flag was when we were waiting in the shadows for the rest of the people who were coming to the buses that were going to ride us to the hotel. The first red flag was when we were waiting in the shadows for the rest of the people who were coming to the buses that were going to |
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It was April. |
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It was cold in Russia, so I was wearing jeans, and a long slave shirt my friend (from now on I'll call her T) had something similar. It |
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It was a bit hot so we decided that bus drivers look at us and smile because of our clothes. It was a bit hot so we |
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We didn't pay much attention to such odd behavior. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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