Day Ten

Today was a very tired day.
I reading about protein.
Protein is very important for the people. I prefere the natural protein like a eggs.
Bodybuildings using protein in big quantities but for the rest of people is not necesary.
In the supermarket exist protein products in abundance, its so crazy

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Day Ten

Today was a very tireding day.

I've been reading about protein.

Protein is very important for the people.

I prefere the natural protein, like afrom eggs.

Bodybuildingers usinge protein in biglarge quantities, but for the rest of the people, that is not necessary.

For things which are general facts, simple present tense works better than the progressive. So, "bodybuilders use protein" instead of "bodybuilders are using protein."

"Big" is usually used for physical size (height, width, and volume), but feels awkward when used for numbers and quantities. "Large" might work better here.

Here, instead of "the people", I might say "us": "...but for the rest of us..." This might sound more natural.

In the supermarket exist, there's so many protein products in abundance, it's so crazy.

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You seem to struggle a little with verb tenses, but otherwise, I can understand you perfectly. Nicely done, keep up the good work!

Today was a very tireding day.

I was reading about protein.

Protein is very important for the people.

I prefere the natural protein, like a eggs.

Bodybuildings using protein in big quantities but for the rest of people is noers eat large quantities of protein, but for most people that isn't necessary.

In the supermarket exist protein products in abundance, its soThere are so many protein products in supermarkets that it's crazy.

Day Ten

Today was a very tireding day.

I was reading about protein.

Or you could also say " I read about protein"

Protein is very important for the people.

I prefere thea natural protein, like a eggs.

Bodybuildings usingers consume protein in big (large) quantities, but for the rest ofmost people it is not necessary.

In the supermarket exist protein products in abundance, its so(grocery store), there are so many protein products it's crazy.

Feedback

Good job! I like eggs too, and I agree that some people can go overboard with protein powder.

Day Ten


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Today was a very tired day.


Today was a very tireding day.

Today was a very tireding day.

Today was a very tireding day.

I reading about protein.


I was reading about protein.

Or you could also say " I read about protein"

I was reading about protein.

I've been reading about protein.

Protein is very important for the people.


Protein is very important for the people.

Protein is very important for the people.

Protein is very important for the people.

I prefere the natural protein like a eggs.


I prefere thea natural protein, like a eggs.

I prefere the natural protein, like a eggs.

I prefere the natural protein, like afrom eggs.

Bodybuildings using protein in big quantities but for the rest of people is not necesary.


Bodybuildings usingers consume protein in big (large) quantities, but for the rest ofmost people it is not necessary.

Bodybuildings using protein in big quantities but for the rest of people is noers eat large quantities of protein, but for most people that isn't necessary.

Bodybuildingers usinge protein in biglarge quantities, but for the rest of the people, that is not necessary.

For things which are general facts, simple present tense works better than the progressive. So, "bodybuilders use protein" instead of "bodybuilders are using protein." "Big" is usually used for physical size (height, width, and volume), but feels awkward when used for numbers and quantities. "Large" might work better here. Here, instead of "the people", I might say "us": "...but for the rest of us..." This might sound more natural.

In the supermarjet exist protein products in abundance, its so crazy


In the supermarket exist protein products in abundance, its so crazy


In the supermarket exist protein products in abundance, its so(grocery store), there are so many protein products it's crazy.

In the supermarket exist protein products in abundance, its soThere are so many protein products in supermarkets that it's crazy.

In the supermarket exist, there's so many protein products in abundance, it's so crazy.

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