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day seven
Im so tired of today. I need sleep more.
In this moment I finished my daily practice english . The topic of today was about rules when you eating. Its a very difficult topic.
Today I write very short phrases , Im sorry. Tomorrow I can do better
dDay sSeven
I'm so tired of today.
I need more sleep more.
In this moment I just finished my daily practice english practice.
The topic of today was about rules when you're eating.
It's a very difficult topic.
Today I'm writeing very short phrases , I'm sorry.
You are forgiven.
Tomorrow I can do better.
dDay sSeven
Capitalize it if it's your title.
I'm so tired of today.
Use “I’m” with the apostrophe. Also, “tired today” is more natural than “tired of today”
I need more sleep more.
Fixed word order.
InAt this moment, I finished my daily English practice english .
Use “At this moment” and also fixed the word order.
The topic of todayoday's topic was about rules when you eating.
“Today’s topic” is smoother.
“when eating” is correct, no need for “you.”
It's a very difficult topic.
Added the apostrophe
Today I wriote very short phrases , I'm sorry.
Use past tense (“wrote”) to match the day’s activity.
Also added the apostrophe.
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day seven
I'm so tired of today.
"I'm so tired of today" has a specific meaning, and I'm not sure if you meant it. It basically means that the things you've done and that happened to you today have been especially horrible and tiresome, to the point you are mentally checked out. "I'm so tired today" is just a general statement about being tired (from a lack of sleep, etc), or "I'm so tired from today" meaning that the events of the day were tiring but it's not as extreme as "tired of today"
I need to sleep more.
or "I need more sleep."
InWith this moment II'll have finished my daily English practice english .
The topic of today was about rules when you eatingtable manners.
"table manners" and "dining etiquette" are phrases for that... though you can say "about rules for eating"
Switched "today" to an adverb because "topic of today" sounds like "today" IS the topic
It's a very difficult topic.
Today I'm writeing very short phrases , I'm sorry.
Tomorrow I can do better
Im so tired of today.
I need to sleep more.
In this moment, I have finished my daily english practice english .
The topic of today was about the rules when you eating.
It’s a very difficult topic.
Today, I wriote very short phrases , I. I am sorry.
Tomorrow, I canwill do better
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Im so tired of today. Im so tired I'm so tired of today. "I'm so tired of today" has a specific meaning, and I'm not sure if you meant it. It basically means that the things you've done and that happened to you today have been especially horrible and tiresome, to the point you are mentally checked out. "I'm so tired today" is just a general statement about being tired (from a lack of sleep, etc), or "I'm so tired from today" meaning that the events of the day were tiring but it's not as extreme as "tired of today" I'm so tired Use “I’m” with the apostrophe. Also, “tired today” is more natural than “tired of today” I'm so tired of today. |
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I need sleep more. I need to sleep more. I need to sleep more. or "I need more sleep." I need more sleep Fixed word order. I need more sleep |
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In this moment I finished my daily practice english . In this moment, I have finished my daily english practice
Use “At this moment” and also fixed the word order. I |
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The topic of today was about rules when you eating. The topic of today was about the rules when you eat The topic "table manners" and "dining etiquette" are phrases for that... though you can say "about rules for eating" Switched "today" to an adverb because "topic of today" sounds like "today" IS the topic T “Today’s topic” is smoother. “when eating” is correct, no need for “you.” The topic of today was about rules when you're eating. |
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Its a very difficult topic. It’s a very difficult topic. It's a very difficult topic. It's a very difficult topic. Added the apostrophe It's a very difficult topic. |
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Today I write very short phrases , Im sorry. Today, I wr Today I'm writ Today I wr Use past tense (“wrote”) to match the day’s activity. Also added the apostrophe. Today I'm writ You are forgiven. |
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Tomorrow I can do better Tomorrow, I This sentence has been marked as perfect! Tomorrow I can do better. |
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