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galoarellano1987

Sept. 4, 2024

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Day One of my streak

I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw in this plataform. I find it funny.
Well, yesterday I was sick with gastroenteritis and fever. The doctor prescribed me full water, probyotic and paracetamol.
When I took the pills, my stomach growled and I say myself "Oh my God, is serious the matter" jaja.
After around 3 hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.
Currently, I feel better but I learned a great lesson :"I must eat more healthly".

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Day One of my streak

I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw ion this plataform.

I fiound it funny.

Since you are referring to the podcast and used past tense "saw" in that previous sentence you should use the past tense of find as well which is "found".

Well, yesterday I was sick with gastroenteritis and a fever.

The doctor prescribed me full water, a probyiotic and paracetamol.

Painkillers would probably sound better in place of paracetamol, but we do sometimes use the drug name or brand name as well.

When I took the pills, my stomach growled and I sayid to myself "Oh my God, this is a serious the matter" jajhaha.

After around 3 hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.

Currently, I feel better but I learned a great lesson :"I must eat more healthly".

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etta

Sept. 5, 2024

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In the last sentence, I would say "I must eat healthier" instead of "more healthily".

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Blkshroud

Sept. 5, 2024

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Good eye. I completely missed that.

I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw ion this plataform.

I fiound it funny.

Well, yesterday I was sick with gastroenteritis and fever.

The doctor prescribed me full water, probyotic and paracetamol.

When I took the pills, my stomach growled and I sayid myself "Oh my God, this is a serious the matter" jaja.

After arboundt 3 hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.

Currently, I feel better but I learned a great lesson :"I must eat more healthily".

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Glad you feel better!

Day One of mMy sStreak

I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw ion this plataform.

I find it funny.

Well, yesterdayUnfortunately, I was sick with gastroenteritis and fever yesterday.

The doctor prescribed me full water, probyiotics, and paracetamol.

When I took the pills, my stomach growled, and I sayid to myself, "Oh my God, this is a serious the matter." jaja.

After around 3three hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.

I'm glad you felt better after the treatment.

Currently, I feel better but, and I learned a great lesson :"I must eat moreto eat healthly".ier.

Day One of my streak


Day One of mMy sStreak

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I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw in this plataform.


I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw ion this plataform.

I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw ion this plataform.

I'm trying to copy a podcast I saw ion this plataform.

I find it funny.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I fiound it funny.

Since you are referring to the podcast and used past tense "saw" in that previous sentence you should use the past tense of find as well which is "found".

I fiound it funny.

Well, yesterday I was sick with gastroenteritis and fever.


Well, yesterdayUnfortunately, I was sick with gastroenteritis and fever yesterday.

Well, yesterday I was sick with gastroenteritis and a fever.

Well, yesterday I was sick with gastroenteritis and fever.

The doctor prescribed me full water, probyotic and paracetamol.


The doctor prescribed me full water, probyiotics, and paracetamol.

The doctor prescribed me full water, a probyiotic and paracetamol.

Painkillers would probably sound better in place of paracetamol, but we do sometimes use the drug name or brand name as well.

The doctor prescribed me full water, probyotic and paracetamol.

After around 3 hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.


After around 3three hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.

I'm glad you felt better after the treatment.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After arboundt 3 hours, my stomach felt better and the fever disappeared.

When I took the pills, my stomach growled and I say myself "Oh my God, is serious the matter" jaja.


When I took the pills, my stomach growled, and I sayid to myself, "Oh my God, this is a serious the matter." jaja.

When I took the pills, my stomach growled and I sayid to myself "Oh my God, this is a serious the matter" jajhaha.

When I took the pills, my stomach growled and I sayid myself "Oh my God, this is a serious the matter" jaja.

Currently, I feel better but I learned a great lesson :"I must eat more healthly".


Currently, I feel better but, and I learned a great lesson :"I must eat moreto eat healthly".ier.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Currently, I feel better but I learned a great lesson :"I must eat more healthily".

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