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yone

March 5, 2025

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Day off

I am excited today because it is day off. I imagined last night that I might go to a hot spring close to my house today. Definitely, I am going to take out my lunch to McDonald. I promised about it to my family. I am expected today because it is day off. I imagine that I would have gone to close a hot spring today. I am going to take out for lunch to McDonald.



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I am excited today because it is my day off.

I imagined last night that I might go to a hot spring close to my house today.

DI am definitely, I am going to get take out my lunch to McDonaldfrom McDonalds for lunch.

I promised about it to my familymy family that I would.

I am expecited today because it is my day off.

I was not sure what you meant by 'expected' here, so I guessed at what you may have wanted to say.

I imagined that I would havehad gone to close a hot spring today.

This is similar to a previous sentence. I prefer the previous sentence...

I am going to get take out for lunch tofrom McDonald's.

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yone

March 10, 2025

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Thank you very much. You told me what was bad points in my sentence. I am so happy.

I am excited today because it ismy day off.

Definitely, I am going to get a take out my lunch tofrom McDonalds.

I promised about it to my family.

I am expected today because it is my day off.

I imagine that I would have gone to a close a hot spring today.

close has 2 meanings.

going to 'a close hot spring' means you will visit one near by.
going to 'close a hot spirng' means you stop it from being open.

I am going to get a take out for lunch tofrom McDonalds.

I am excited today because it is a day off.

DI am definitely, I am going to take out my lunch toget a take-away from McDonalds.

I'm British so we say "take-away" but you can also say "I am going to get a take out".

I promised about itthis to my family.

I am expected today because it is a day off.

I imagine that I would have gone to close a hot spring today.

This sentence sounds like it needs another clause e.g "I imagine that I would have gone to a hot spring today if there had been one close by". Or, "I imagine that I would have gone to a hot spring today if I hadn't gone to McDonalds."

I am going to get a take out for lunch ato McDonalds.

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Frenchgeek

March 6, 2025

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Good luck!

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yone

March 6, 2025

1

Really, thank you very much. Your explanation is useful for me.

I promised about it to my family.


I promised about itthis to my family.

I promised about it to my family.

I promised about it to my familymy family that I would.

I am expected today because it is day off.


I am expected today because it is a day off.

I am expected today because it is my day off.

I am expecited today because it is my day off.

I was not sure what you meant by 'expected' here, so I guessed at what you may have wanted to say.

I imagine that I would have gone to close a hot spring today.


I imagine that I would have gone to close a hot spring today.

This sentence sounds like it needs another clause e.g "I imagine that I would have gone to a hot spring today if there had been one close by". Or, "I imagine that I would have gone to a hot spring today if I hadn't gone to McDonalds."

I imagine that I would have gone to a close a hot spring today.

close has 2 meanings. going to 'a close hot spring' means you will visit one near by. going to 'close a hot spirng' means you stop it from being open.

I imagined that I would havehad gone to close a hot spring today.

This is similar to a previous sentence. I prefer the previous sentence...

I am going to take out for lunch to McDonald.


I am going to get a take out for lunch ato McDonalds.

I am going to get a take out for lunch tofrom McDonalds.

I am going to get take out for lunch tofrom McDonald's.

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Day off


I am excited today because it is day off.


I am excited today because it is a day off.

I am excited today because it ismy day off.

I am excited today because it is my day off.

I imagined last night that I might go to a hot spring close to my house today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Definitely, I am going to take out my lunch to McDonald.


DI am definitely, I am going to take out my lunch toget a take-away from McDonalds.

I'm British so we say "take-away" but you can also say "I am going to get a take out".

Definitely, I am going to get a take out my lunch tofrom McDonalds.

DI am definitely, I am going to get take out my lunch to McDonaldfrom McDonalds for lunch.

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