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Day Eleven

Today was a so weir day an also a long day.
Tomorrow is my flute concert, I'm so excited for this.Is going a great day for me.
I was practicing many days.For now is time to sleep .

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Today was a sosuch a weird day and also a long day.

It's going to be a great day for me.

I was practicing for many days.

For now it's time to sleep .

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Good luck!

Today was a so weird day and also a long day.

Tomorrow is my flute concert, I'm so excited for this.

It's going to be a great day for me.

I was practicing manylots of days.

For now it is time to sleep .

Day Eleven

Today was a sovery weird day, and also a long day.

Alternatively: "Today was so weird, and also long." or "Today was such a weird day, and also such a long day."

Tomorrow is my flute concert, and I'm so excited for this.it!

"so excited" makes me feel like there should be an exclamation mark.

It's going to be a great day for me.

I was've been practicing for many days.

"I was" works fine as well. But "I've been" can suggest a more recent past (as this is), and therefore sounds a little more natural here.

FBut for now, it's time to sleep .

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Overall, very nicely done! Just remember that English often needs what we call the "dummy pronoun". If "is" would otherwise be by itself, you'll need to also add an "it". So, "it is". Which can be contracted into "it's" (native speakers use contractions a lot).

"It is going to be..." or "It's going to be...", "It is time to sleep" or "It's time to sleep", etc.

Day Eleven


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Today was a so weir day an also a long day.


Today was a sovery weird day, and also a long day.

Alternatively: "Today was so weird, and also long." or "Today was such a weird day, and also such a long day."

Today was a so weird day and also a long day.

Today was a sosuch a weird day and also a long day.

Tomorrow is my flute concert, I'm so excited for this.


Tomorrow is my flute concert, and I'm so excited for this.it!

"so excited" makes me feel like there should be an exclamation mark.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is going a great day for me.


It's going to be a great day for me.

It's going to be a great day for me.

It's going to be a great day for me.

I was practicing many days.


I was've been practicing for many days.

"I was" works fine as well. But "I've been" can suggest a more recent past (as this is), and therefore sounds a little more natural here.

I was practicing manylots of days.

I was practicing for many days.

For now is time to sleep .


FBut for now, it's time to sleep .

For now it is time to sleep .

For now it's time to sleep .

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