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I moved clauses around to add clarity and improve flow. Starting a sentence with "But," as I did, is technically incorrect, but even many English-speaking authors do this on purpose to make their writing more natural.

I enjoyed watching her. I liked her movements and. Her style and got the pleasure of watching her.

Writing shorter sentences in English improves the experience of reading. I also changed the verb tense for consistency.

Initially, I thought that there wasn't enough room and that is. That must be why he danced so close to me.

I moved forward, and he followed me, I was. I steppinged back and so did he.

I came closer to my friend just in case that guy tried to pick me up. I thought, to myself that maybe if he had noticed that I was with someone, he wouldn't have been so clingy.

It worked, for some time he disappeared and appeared again w. He disappeared for a while. When I decided to take a break at the wall, he showed up again.

It sounds a little awkward to put a lot of sequential events in one sentence.

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I got home around 5 a.m. ¶
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I added a predicate to make a sentence more complete.

I was about to make a fancy breakfast and, not a toast with cheese again.

However, aAfter a little chit-chat with coworkers, I agreed to show them a beautiful place on the Iisland.

I wouldn't put "however" unless it seems like this sentence contradicts the previous sentence.

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Separating the sentences here can make it a bit easier to read as the original sentence was quite long.

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I got home around 5 a.m. ¶
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My morning had started at 10.

I was about to make a fancy breakfast and not ajust toast with cheese again.

However, after a littlsome chit-chat with my coworkers, I agreed to show them a beautiful place on the Island.

When using 'however' here, it makes me wonder - did your chit-chat with your coworkers stop you from making your breakfast? If so, maybe adding "...on the Island, instead of making breakfast." can make it more clear.

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I liked her movements and style and got the pleasure ofenjoyed watching her.

I moved forward, and he followed me, I was steppinged back and so did he.

I came closer to my friend just in case that guy tried to pick me up. I thought, maybe if he had noticed that I was with someone he wouldn't have been so clingy.

It worked, for some time he disappeared and appeared again when I decided to take a break atby the wall.

I was flattered but it's not how I planned to finish mythe night.

I got home around 5 a.m. ¶
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Well, she had brought a dog so my day became brighter.