May 12, 2022
Day at work
Today I started work at 8 am. I work from home so I didn't have to leave the house, prepare clothes, buy lunch and all that. I just had to get to my home office, turn on the computer and start working. That's very nice, because I save a lot of time and money, but at the same time I don't get to talk to my workmates, which is something I like. At 8 am I felt kinda tired, which is something normal in me. I checked my email and the Teams app to see if there was anything new or anything that needed my attention. After that I went to the kitchen and quickly prepared my breakfast: black coffee, scrambled eggs with onion, and a Costarican dish called "gallo pinto" which is made of rice and beans. I took it to my desk and ate it there (being careful of not spilling anything or damaging the company's computer). Right after that I started doing my regular tasks: updating a couple of Excel sheets and looking for some information.
DA day at work
Today, I started work at 8 am.
I work from home, so I didn't have to leave the house, prepare clothes, buy lunch and all that, etc.
I just had to get to my home office, turn on the computer and start working.
ThaIt's very nice, because I save a lot of time and money, but at the same time, I don't get to talk to my workmates, which is something I like.
At 8 am, I felt kindapretty tired, which is something normal intypical for me.
I checked my email and the Teams app to see if there was anything new or anything that needed my attention.
After that, I went to the kitchen and quickly prepared my breakfast: black coffee, scrambled eggs with onion, and a Costarican dish called "gGallo pinto," which is made of rice and beans.
I took it to my desk and ate it there (being careful of not to spilling anything or damaginge the company's computer).
Right aAfter that, I started doing my regular tasks: updating a couple of Excel sheets and looking for some information.
Feedback
Pretty much perfect! Just some stylistic changes here and there! Plus commas (which are pretty necessary for written English). Amazing job!
May 12, 2022
Thanks a lot!
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Day at work
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Today I started work at 8 am. Today, I started work at 8 am. |
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I work from home so I didn't have to leave the house, prepare clothes, buy lunch and all that. I work from home, so I didn't have to leave the house, prepare clothes, buy lunch |
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I just had to get to my home office, turn on the computer and start working. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's very nice, because I save a lot of time and money, but at the same time I don't get to talk to my workmates, which is something I like.
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At 8 am I felt kinda tired, which is something normal in me. At 8 am, I felt |
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I checked my email and the Teams app to see if there was anything new or anything that needed my attention. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that I went to the kitchen and quickly prepared my breakfast: black coffee, scrambled eggs with onion, and a Costarican dish called "gallo pinto" which is made of rice and beans. After that, I went to the kitchen and quickly prepared my breakfast: black coffee, scrambled eggs with onion, and a Costarican dish called " |
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I took it to my desk and ate it there (being careful of not spilling anything or damaging the company's computer). I took it to my desk and ate it there (being careful |
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Right after that I started doing my regular tasks: updating a couple of Excel sheets and looking for some information.
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