Day 9 Journaling

Hi.
Today I wake up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't... Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+. That's a smartphone I'd really appreciate to have, but I can't because I don't have the money for. To solve this problem, I have decided that I'll keep all the money that my parents, grandparents and uncle are going to give me, and in 2 years, I'll have enough money to buy it. Plus, his price will decrease with the time. Today, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because he will not have the future updates so that's not good.
After watching these videos, I ate breakfast with my grandparents, I took a bath, and I helped my grandfather with his computer. Then we had lunch and it was time for me and my little brother to say goodbye to our grandparents and go back to our house. I was pretty sad in the train to Paris.
But I was also happy when I saw my parents.
It was a really good day too but I am not happy for haven’t did my homework this morning.
Thanks for all the corrections: )

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Day 9 Journaling

Hi.

Today I waoke up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...

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Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos which talkinged about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

That's a smartphone I'd really appreciatlike to have, but I can't because I don't have the money for it.

To solve this problem, I have decided that I'll keep all the money that my parents, grandparents and uncle are going to give me, and so, in 2 years, I'll have enough money to buy it.

Plus, histhe price will decrease with theover time.

TodaCurrently, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because hehas become obsolete meaning that it will not have the future updates so that's not good.

After watching these videos, I ate breakfast with my grandparents, I took a bath, and I helped my grandfather with his computer.

Then we had lunch and after it was time for me and my little brother and me to say goodbye to our grandparents and go back to our houshome.

I was pretty sad ion the train to Paris but I was also happy to see my parents.

But I was also happy when I saw my parents.

It was a really good day too but I am not happy for haven’because I didn't dido my homework this morning.

Thanks for all the corrections: )

Feedback

Good work!

Thanks 😊

Day 9 Journaling

Hi.

Today I waoke up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...

Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

Instead of doing my homework, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

But I was also happy when I saw my parents.

Thanks for all the corrections: )

Thanks for the correction: )

Day 9 Journaling

Hi.

Today I waoke up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...

Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

That's a smartphone I'd really appreciatlike to have, but I can't because I don't have the money for it.

(or: appreciate having,)

To solve this problem, I have decided that I'll keep all the money that my parents, grandparents and uncle are going to give me, and in 2 years, I'll have enough money to buy it.

Plus, his price will decrease with the time.

Today, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because heis becoming obsolete as it will not have threceive future updates, so that's not good.

After watching these videos, I ate breakfast with my grandparents, I took a bath, and I helped my grandfather with his computer.

Then we had lunch and it was time for me and my little brother to say goodbye to our grandparents and go back to our house.

I was pretty sad ion the train to Paris.

But I was also happy when I saw my parents.

It was a really good day too, but I am not happy for haven’because I didn't dido my homework this morning.

Thanks for all the corrections: )

Feedback

Great writing! The S23+ does look like a good phone!
I hope you managed to catch up with your homework!

Thanks, I'll do it the next week :)

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Instead of doing it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

This helps the writing sound smoother and more natural

Plus, hit’s price will decrease with the time.

Today, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because heit will not have the future updates so that's not good.

I was pretty sad ion the train to Paris.

It was a really good day too but I am not happy for havebecause I didn’t dido my homework this morning.

Feedback

Nice job :)

Thanks: )

After watching these videos, I ate breakfast with my grandparents, I took a bath, and I helped my grandfather with his computer.


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After watching these videos, I ate breakfast with my grandparents, I took a bath, and I helped my grandfather with his computer.

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Today I wake up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...


Today I waoke up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...

Today I waoke up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...

Today I waoke up early and I had to do my homework, but I didn't...

to wake, woke, has woken

Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.


Instead of doing it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

This helps the writing sound smoother and more natural

Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

Instead of doing my homework, I watched YouTube videos talking about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

Instead of it, I watched YouTube videos which talkinged about the new Samsung Galaxy S23+.

That's a smartphone I'd really appreciate to have, but I can't because I don't have the money for.


That's a smartphone I'd really appreciatlike to have, but I can't because I don't have the money for it.

(or: appreciate having,)

That's a smartphone I'd really appreciatlike to have, but I can't because I don't have the money for it.

To solve this problem, I have decided that I'll keep all the money that my parents, grandparents and uncle are going to give me, and in 2 years, I'll have enough money to buy it.


To solve this problem, I have decided that I'll keep all the money that my parents, grandparents and uncle are going to give me, and in 2 years, I'll have enough money to buy it.

To solve this problem, I have decided that I'll keep all the money that my parents, grandparents and uncle are going to give me, and so, in 2 years, I'll have enough money to buy it.

Plus, his price will decrease with the time.


Plus, hit’s price will decrease with the time.

Plus, his price will decrease with the time.

Plus, histhe price will decrease with theover time.

Today, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because he will not have the future updates so that's not good.


Today, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because heit will not have the future updates so that's not good.

Today, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because heis becoming obsolete as it will not have threceive future updates, so that's not good.

TodaCurrently, I have a Samsung Galaxy S20 but it comes to an end because hehas become obsolete meaning that it will not have the future updates so that's not good.

Then we had lunch and it was time for me and my little brother to say goodbye to our grandparents and go back to our house.


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Then we had lunch and after it was time for me and my little brother and me to say goodbye to our grandparents and go back to our houshome.

I was pretty sad in the train to Paris.


I was pretty sad ion the train to Paris.

I was pretty sad ion the train to Paris.

I was pretty sad ion the train to Paris but I was also happy to see my parents.

But I was also happy when I saw my parents.


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But I was also happy when I saw my parents.

It was a really good day too but I am not happy for haven’t did my homework this morning.


It was a really good day too but I am not happy for havebecause I didn’t dido my homework this morning.

It was a really good day too, but I am not happy for haven’because I didn't dido my homework this morning.

It was a really good day too but I am not happy for haven’because I didn't dido my homework this morning.

Thanks for all the corrections: )


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