XIAOCHI's avatar
XIAOCHI

yesterday

2
Day 8

I went to see Predator: Badlands at the cinema today. The ticket cost me 50 RMB, about 7 dollars. What do you think about the price?
It's a decent commercial film, not very hard-core, but that's fine, considering its PG-13 rating, which was meant to appeal to a mass market.
My original motivation for watching the movie was the cool fight scenes and the exotic alien monsters. I can say that all those expectations were well met. It was totally worth it.


Have a great day!

Corrections

What do you think about the price?

The ticket is €16 (~$19) at the cheap times and €21 (~$24) at the expensive times here

It's a decent commercial film, not very hard-core, but that's fine, considering its PG-13 rating, which was meant to appeal to a mass market.

Too many pauses in a sentence makes it a feel a little disjointed and little hard to read, so I took out some of the commas

Day 8


I went to see Predator: Badlands at the cinema today.


The ticket cost me 50 RMB, about 7 dollars.


What do you think about the price?


What do you think about the price?

The ticket is €16 (~$19) at the cheap times and €21 (~$24) at the expensive times here

It's a decent commercial film, not very hard-core, but that's fine, considering its PG-13 rating, which was meant to appeal to a mass market.


It's a decent commercial film, not very hard-core, but that's fine, considering its PG-13 rating, which was meant to appeal to a mass market.

Too many pauses in a sentence makes it a feel a little disjointed and little hard to read, so I took out some of the commas

My original motivation for watching the movie was the cool fight scenes and the exotic alien monsters.


I can say that all those expectations were well met.


It was totally worth it.


You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium