Nov. 15, 2024
Day 7
Society nowadays often lacks communication in family because of busy life and work. Lack of communication and conversation in family may lead to family disintegration. Communication helps us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions. Moreover, communication helps strengthen the familiarity and the connection in family, helps us to care and respect each other. This attitude takes an important role in preventing family conflicts.
Xã hội hiện đại thường thiếu sự giao tiếp trong gia đình do cuộc sống bận rộn và công việc. Trường hợp thiếu sự giao tiếp và đối thoại giữa gia đình có thể dẫn đến sự tan rã của gia đình. Giao tiếp giúp chúng ta hiểu được suy nghĩ và cảm xúc của nhau. Hơn nữa, giao tiếp giúp tăng cường tình cảm thân thiết và gắn kết giữa gia đình, giúp chúng ta có thể quan tâm và tôn trọng lẫn nhau. Thái độ này đóng vai trò quan trọng trong việc ngăn ngừa xung đột gia đình.
Day 7
Society nowadays often lacks family communication in family because ofdue to work and having a busy life and work.
Lack of communication and conversation inwithin the family may lead to family arguments and eventually the disintegration of a family.
Communication helps us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions.
Moreover, communication helps strengthen the familiarity and the connection in the family, which helps us to care and respect each other.
This attitude takes an important role in preventing family conflicts.
Nov. 18, 2024
Thank you for your correction.
Nov. 18, 2024
No problem.
Day 7
Society nowadays often lacks communication inwith family because of a busy life and work.
Remove "in" with "with" because you're communicating "with" someone
Lack of communication andwith conversation in family may lead to family disintegrationpeople drifting apart.
I understand what you're trying to say, but "drifting apart" might be better.
Communication helps us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions.
Moreover, communication helps strengthen the familiarity and the connection in family, helps us to care and respect each other.
This attitude takes an important role in preventing family conflicts.
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Very nice message, I understood everything. Keep up the great work!
Nov. 16, 2024
Thank you for your correction and encouragement. I hope my writing skills will be better day by day.
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Basically clear. Use more hedged expressions.
Nov. 17, 2024
Thank you for your correction. Honestly, I didn't know about hedged expressions until you told me. Therefore, your advice helps me a lot to improve my writing skills.
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This attitude takes an important role in preventing family conflicts.
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