Jan. 16, 2024
Day 7
Today, I feel really tired and a little bit stressed. That's why I can't write too much, I was about to fall asleep while I was writing this entry. My inner voice told me that I should not write anything today, but I really wanted to, and I also have to record my audio diary entry. I don't know what more to say, so don't give up, we can do it!
Day 7
Today, I feel really tired and a little bit stressed.
That's why I can't write too much,. I was about to fall asleep while I was writing this entry.
This can be two separate sentences.
My inner voice told me that I should not write anything today, but I really wanted to, and. I also have to record my audio diary entry.
A bit long, so separating them into two sentences breaks it up.
I don't know what more to say, so don't give up, we can do it!
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Great writing! Keep going! You're strong for doing this even while you're tired. I commend you!
That's why I can't write too much,. I was about to fall asleep while I was writing this entry.
Would separate using period here because otherwise a little long.
My inner voice told me that I should not write anything today, but I really wanted to, and. I also have to record my audio diary entry...
I would separate these into two sentences here as well.
I'm not sure I quite understand the first part logically -- if your inner voice told you that you should not write today, doesn't that mean you didn't really want to?
You could say "inner demons" as well in a non-formal setting or as a kind of joke.
I don't know what more to say, so d. Don't give up, we can do it!
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Kudos to you for writing a journal even though you were tired!
That's why I can't write too much,. I was about to fall asleep while I was writing this entry.
Run on sentences
My inner voice told me that I should not write anything today, but I really wanted to, and. I also have to record my audio diary entry.
I don't know what more to say, so don't give up, w. We can do it!
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Your grammar is great. You just have issues with run-on sentences. Some resources can be found here: https://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/run-on_sentence.htm
Sometimes shorter sentences are better, especially when each sentence has one idea.
Keep up the good work!
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