March 2, 2023
Day 53 of My English Challenge
I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing. Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combination between sport and art. I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance steps someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first. I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it. I'm going to try break dance and hip-hop and I'm going to choose the best one for me.
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Day 53 of My English Challenge
I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.
Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combination betweenof sports and art.
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I would like to create my own choreography and my own dance steps some day but for that I need to become a good dancer first.
I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop (style) and I think that I like it.
I'm going to try break dance and hip-hop and then I'm going to choose the bestter one for me.
With two choices, we use better or worse. With more than two choices, we use best or worst.
Thanks for reading!!!
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楽しんで下さい！よく出来ました！
March 3, 2023
ありがとうございます、がんばります!!!
Day 53 of My English Challenge
I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.
Dancing is something that I would really like to try, as it's a combination between sport and art.
I would like to create my own choreography and my own dance steps someday, but for that I need to become a good dancer first.
I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it.
I'm going to try to break dance and hip-hop and. Then I'm going to choose thewhat's best one for me.
Thanks for reading!!!
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Well done! Dancing sounds like fun but not something I could do because I'm clumsy haha. Have fun!
March 3, 2023
I'm very bad at dancing ,too haha. But I think that if I put effort into it, I'll be able to become very good at it. If it sounds fun for you, I think that you should try it
March 3, 2023
Thanks for your corrections!!
Day 53 of My English Challenge
I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.
Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combination between sport and art.
I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance stepmoves someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first.
I ha’ve been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop stylehip-hop dancers and I think that I like it.
This is the most natural and simple way to say it!
Because you’re using an informal tense (e.g conjunctions “I’m”) you need to continue this with “I have” -> “I’ve” !
I'm going to try break danceing and hip-hop and I'm going to choose the best one for mechoose the one I think best suites me to focus on.
This makes more sense and is more natural
Thanks for reading!!!
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Nice! It is so fun to try new things, I wish you luck Fernan! And wow six days a week is dedication well done!
March 3, 2023
Thank you so much, your corrections are really helpful!! Thank you for the encouragement, too.
I have been working out six days a week, however I think that I'm going to reduce it to only three days a week in order to have more time to practice dancing.
Dancing is something that I would really like to try as it's a combinationross between sport and art.
I would like to create my own choreograpy and my own dance steps someday but for that I need to become a good dancer first.
I have been watching videos of people dancing hip-hop style and I think that I like it.
I'm going to try both break danceing and hip-hop and I'm going to choosthen focus on the one theat best one forsuits me.
March 3, 2023
Thank you!!
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