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Fernanhaiku

March 1, 2023

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Day 52: Too Much Habits

I think that I'm a little bit obssesed about making new habits. I just need to focus on two habits for now because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habits. So, for now, I'm going to focus on my workout and meditation habits. Maybe after those habits have been established I could start my journaling habit. But that doesn't mean that I'm going to stop writing in my diary. Wish me luck!
Thanks for reading!!

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Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

I think that I'm a little bit too obssessed aboutwith making new habits.

I just need to focus on two habits for now because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habitsof them.

そうですね。

So, for now, I'm going to focus on my workout and meditation habits.

Maybe after those habits have been established I couldan start my journaling habit.

But that doesn't mean that I'm going to stop writing in my diary.

Wish me luck!

Thanks for reading!!

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いい発想です。頑張って下さい!よく出来ました!

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Fernanhaiku

March 2, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!!

Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

I think that I'm a little bit obssessed about making new habits.

I just need to focus on two habits for now, because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habitsof them.

So, for now, I'm going to focus on my workout and meditation habits.

Maybe after those habits have been established I could start my journaling habit.

But that doesn't mean that I'm going to stop writing in my diary.

Wish me luck!

Thanks for reading!!

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Good job! It really is a good idea to only have a couple habits at a time, otherwise you'll burn out and nothing will be fun anymore. Good luck!

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Fernanhaiku

March 2, 2023

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I have burned out many times, because I used to have a lot of hobbies and many responsabilites. Thank you for your corrections!!

Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

More examples:
“Too many clothes” “too many shoes” “there’s too many people in this room!”

I think that I'm a little bit obssessed aboutwith making new habits.

“I think I’m a bit obsessed with you.”
“I’m obsessed with this new show.”

I just need to focus on two habits for now because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habitsof them.

More natural

So, for now, I'm going to focus on my working out and meditation habitsng.

We overuse the gerund in English. A prime example of this is when listing off habits/activities as you’ve done !

Maybe after those habits have been established I could/can start my journaling habit.

Can is more natural here but could is sensical

But that doesn't mean that I'm going to stop writing in my diary.

Wish me luck!

Thanks for reading!!

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Great work Fernan, yes it is important to have rest and to go easy on ourselves, having self compassion is the best way to learn as we can forgive our mistakes and keep going! Well done!

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Fernanhaiku

March 2, 2023

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ooo I hadn't heard about self compassion, I'm going to do some research. Thank you so much for your advice and for all of your corrections!!

Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

"Habit" is a countable noun and we use 'too many' with countable nouns.

I think that I'm a little bit obssessed about making new habits.

nothing major, just a small typo

Maybe after those habits have been established I could start my journaling habit.

But that doesn't mean that I'm going to stop writing in my diary.

Wish me luck!

Thanks for reading!!

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Fernanhaiku

March 2, 2023

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Thank you!!!

Day 52: Too Much Habits


Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

"Habit" is a countable noun and we use 'too many' with countable nouns.

Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

More examples: “Too many clothes” “too many shoes” “there’s too many people in this room!”

Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

Day 52: Too Muchany Habits

I think that I'm a little bit obssesed about making new habits.


I think that I'm a little bit obssessed about making new habits.

nothing major, just a small typo

I think that I'm a little bit obssessed aboutwith making new habits.

“I think I’m a bit obsessed with you.” “I’m obsessed with this new show.”

I think that I'm a little bit obssessed about making new habits.

I think that I'm a little bit too obssessed aboutwith making new habits.

I just need to focus on two habits for now because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habits.


I just need to focus on two habits for now because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habitsof them.

More natural

I just need to focus on two habits for now, because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habitsof them.

I just need to focus on two habits for now because if I try to create more habits than I can handle, I'll end up quitting all the habitsof them.

そうですね。

So, for now, I'm going to focus on my workout and meditation habits.


So, for now, I'm going to focus on my working out and meditation habitsng.

We overuse the gerund in English. A prime example of this is when listing off habits/activities as you’ve done !

So, for now, I'm going to focus on my workout and meditation habits.

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Maybe after those habits have been established I could start my journaling habit.


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Maybe after those habits have been established I could/can start my journaling habit.

Can is more natural here but could is sensical

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Maybe after those habits have been established I couldan start my journaling habit.

Wish me luck!


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Thanks for reading!!


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But that doesn't mean that I'm going to stop writing in my diary.


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