Feb. 27, 2023
Day 50: Music
I love listening to music, I even would like to write my own songs and share them with the world someday. However, for that I need to learn to play an instrument first. Some of my options are ukelele, piano, acoustic guitar and bass. It's not my plan to become famous and I just would like to create my own songs with profound messages and relaxing melodies. The simple idea of thinking about me writing songs in a notebook, working several days trying to polish them and having a small group of people who listen to my songs charms me. I think that my soul needs to create art to be happy and calm.
Thanks for reading!!
Day 50: Music
I love listening to music,. I even would even like to write my own songs and share them with the world someday.
However, for that I need to learn to play an instrument first.
Some of my options are ukelele, piano, acoustic guitar and bass.
It's not my plan to become famous, and I just would like to create my own songs with profound messages and relaxing melodies.
You could also say "I don't plan to" instead of "It's not my plan". :)
The simple idea of thinking about me writing songs in a notebook,; working several days trying to polish them and having a small group of people who listen to my songs charms me.
You could also say "makes me happy" or something similar instead of "charms me" but it's still correct!
I think that my soul needs to create art to be happy and calm.
Thanks for reading!!
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Good job!
Day 50: Music
I love listening to music,. I even would even like to write my own songs and share them with the world someday.
However, for that, I need to learn to play an instrument first.
Some of my options are ukelele, piano, acoustic guitar and bass.
It's not my plan to become famous and I just would. I would just like to create my own songs with profound messages and relaxing melodies.
The simple idea of thinking about meyself writing songs in a notebook, working several days trying to polish them, and having a small group of people who listen to my songs charms me.
I think that my soul needs to create art to be happy and calm.
Thanks for reading!!
Feedback
Well done! That's so lovely that you want to create your own music like that. Good luck and have fun!
Feb. 28, 2023
Thank you!!! I'll try it
Day 50: Music
I love listening to music,. I even would like to write my own songs and share them with the world some day.
すごい！
However, for thatFor that, however, I need to learn how to play an instrument first.
Some of my options are ukelele, piano, acoustic guitar and bass.
It's not my plan to become famous andbecause I just would like to create my own songs with profound messages and relaxing melodies.
The simple idea of thinking about me writing songs in a notebook, working several days trying to polish them and having a small group of people who listen to my songs charms memakes me happy.
I think that my soul needs to create art to be happy and calm.
Thanks for reading!!
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よく分かりました。私も！上手に書けています！
Feb. 28, 2023
ありがとう!! :)
Day 50: Music
I love listening to music, I even would even like to write my own songs and share them with the world someday.
However, for that I need to learn to play an instrument first.
Some of my options are ukelele, piano, acoustic guitar andor bass.
It's not my plan to become famous and. I just would like to create my own songs with profound messages and relaxing melodies.
The simple idea of thinking about me writing songs in a notebook, working several days trying to polish them and having a small group of people who listening to my songs charms me.
I think that my soul needs to create art to be happy and calm.
Thanks for reading!!
Feb. 28, 2023
thank you!
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