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DAEMONIC01

July 9, 2025

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Day 5: When Rain Comes

"When Rain Comes"

This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking today's journey. It can be interpreted in many ways. First of all, it rains for two days here. This bright and sunny city suddenly turned to a sad, wet, and relatively cold place. The wind also brought out my migraine.

But this tiny sentence also has its own abstract meanings. I'm sure that everyone has their own rainy days, even if the sun is shining outside. Whether it's about everyday life, work or even learning a language, no one feels the same motivation every day. Everyone has their own ways to get through these days. There are solutions, that work, and those that don't.

This is one of my rainy days. Even writing a (probably wrong :D) sentence is really hard for me today. No motivation, no inspiration, I just want to survive this day. This is my solution right now. But I think, it's more than nothing. We could go to bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but it's not a perfect option, because if we leave out a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.

That's what streaks are about, right? On Duolingo and other platforms, or even here. Keep working on your dreams, whether it's small or big, and if you work hard and long enough, maybe you'll succeed. After all, rainy days doesn't last forever. It may wash away our plans, but it also can be refreshing. Maybe that's why the next day feels so much better.

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"When Rain Comes" ¶

This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking today's journey.


Today, I thought about this sentence: "When rain comes."¶


When you make it simple even a layman can understand and it makes the reader to imagine the story line.

It can be interpreted in many ways.has many meaning.¶

Make it simple and save time.

First of all, it rains for two days here.

This bright and sunny city suddenly turned to a sad, wet, and relatively cold place

The weather changed. It was sunny, but now it’s cold and wet
.

Simplified

The wind also brought out my migraine.gave me a strong headache.¶

Migraine is a medical term...a layman understands strong headache.

But this tiny sentence also has its own abstract meanings.means more than just the weather.¶

Simplified

Whether it's about everyday life

Sometimes we feel tired, sad
, work or even learning a language, no one feels the same motivation every day. don’t feel like doing anything.¶
This can happen at work, at school, or when learning a language.¶

Simplified

Everyone has their own ways to get through thesefeel better during this days.

Layman understands

There are solutions, that work, and those thatSome things help, some don't.

Very clear and direct.



Even writing a (probably wrong :D) sentence is really hard for me today.this post is difficult.¶

It feels natural putting it this way.

No motivation, no inspiration, I feel tired and don’t have energy or ideas.I just want to survive this day.

Simplified

This is my solution right now

But writing this is my way of trying
.

Direct to the point helps the point be easily identified

But I think, it's more than trying is better than doing nothing.

Simplified.

We could go tostay in bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but it's not a perfect option, because if we leave out a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.do nothing. But then tomorrow will be harder.¶


Simplified

That's what streaks are about, right?y learning every day is important

Simplified

On Duolingo and other platforms, or even here.

It may wash away our plans, but it also can be refreshing.They can slow us down for a while, but they can also give us a new start.¶

"Wash away " not everyone will understand this expression

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Nice story...but when simplified it makes it easy for everyone to read ..if you want me to help you simplify any other story just let me know.

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DAEMONIC01

July 9, 2025

9

Thank you for your suggestions! I understand the importance of clarity and simplicity, especially when writing for a general audience.

However, my current goal is to reach fluency at a C2 level, which means I'M focusing on creating as complex texts and sentences as possible.
It's not because I want others not to understand. But I think I can't improve my English, if I simplify everything to A1. Of course, if I were writing directly for laypeople, I would write more simply, but as I know, this is what I need to do for my current goals.

Anyways, if I were to write everything simplified, there would be almost nothing to correct. I could do it, but that would just make me believe that my English is perfect. But it's not.😊

Day 5: When Rain Comes

This title is fine, but I think most native speakers would say "when the rain comes"

"When Rrain Ccomes" ¶

." This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking about today's journey.

Since we're no longer in the title, no need to capitalize inside the quotes.

It can be interpreted in many ways.

First of all, it's been rainsing for two days here.

Your original sentence implies that where you live, when it rains it always rains for literally two exact days. From your post, it sounds like you are describing the current rain, which has been ongoing for two days. If that's the case, this edit is correct.

This bright and sunny city suddenly turned into a sad, wet, and relatively cold place.

When something transforms into something else: x turns into y
"Turn to" can be literal or figurative where the subject turns their direction: "Sarah turned to her left and saw the cat." "Sarah turned to a friend to ask for advice about her cat."

The wind also brought out my migraine.

But this tiny sentence also has its own abstract meanings.

I'm sure that everyone has their own rainy days, even if the sun is shining outside.

Whether it's about everyday life, work or even learning a language, no one feels the same motivation every day.

Everyone has their own ways to get through these days.

There are solutions, that work, and those that don't.

This is one of my rainy days.

Even writing a (probably wrong :D) sentence is really hard for me today.

No motivation, no inspiration, I just want to survive this day.

This is my solution right now.

But I think, it's morebetter than nothing.

We could go to bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but ithat's not a perfect opsolution, because if we leave outskip a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.

You could say "not a good option" or "not a perfect solution," but we generally do not say "perfect option."
When you have a set routine but miss a part of it, we call it "skipping." John skipped school today. Normally I go to the gym every day, but I skipped it yesterday.

On Duolingo and, other platforms, or even here.

Keep working on your dreams, whether it's small or bigthey are big or small, and if you work hard and long enough, maybe you'll succeed.

Dreams = plural
This is arbitrary, but "big or small" is basically always in this order in English

After all, rainy days doesn't last forever.

Feedback

Good job. Don't be modest about your English, you are doing so well! I noticed correct usage between "every day" vs "everyday" and "its" vs "it's" which are very often confused.

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DAEMONIC01

July 9, 2025

9

Thank you so much. Learning a language is brutally hard for me because the lack of logic. Of course, languages have some rules, but they generally aren't logical, but traditional. I learned Python, R or even SQL easily, because they are mostly logical. For example Present Perfect tense... There is no such thing in Hungarian. If I say "I lost my keys" or "I've lost my keys" in Hungarian, they mean the same thing. 😄

Day 5: When Rain Comes

"When Rain Comes"


This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking
about today's journey.

First of all, it has been rainsing for two days here.

If it's still raining, my correction above is right. If it has stopped, then 'it rained' is correct, instead.

This bright and sunny city suddenly turned into a sad, wet, and relatively cold place.

The wind also brought out my migraine.

But this tiny sentence also has its own abstract meanings.

I'm sure that everyone has their own rainy days, even if the sun is shining outside.

Whether it's about everyday life, work or even learning a language, no one feels the same motivation every day.

Everyone has their own ways to get through these days.

There are solutions, that work, and those that don't.

This is one of my rainy days.

Even writing a (probably wrong :D) sentence is really hard for me today.

No motivation, no inspiration, I just want to survive this day.

This is my solution right now.

But I think, it's morebetter than nothing.

We could go to bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but i. However, that's not a perfect option, because if we leave outskip a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.

I split this sentence up because it was a 'run-on' sentence.

That's what streaks are about, right?

On Duolingo and other platforms, or even on here.

Keep working on your dreams, whether it'sthey're small or big, and, if you work hard and long enough, maybe you'll succeed.

After all, rainy days doesn't last forever.

ItRain may wash away our plans, but it can also can be refreshing.

Maybe that's why the next day feels so much better.

Feedback

Excellent work. It was completely comprehensible. Learning a new language is really tiring and it's sometimes discouraging, but you're right. We need to just keep trying, even if we continuously get things wrong.

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DAEMONIC01

July 9, 2025

9

Thank you. Yeah, doing something imperfect is better than nothing.

This is my solution right now.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is my solution right now

But writing this is my way of trying
.

Direct to the point helps the point be easily identified

But I think, it's more than nothing.


But I think, it's morebetter than nothing.

But I think, it's morebetter than nothing.

But I think, it's more than trying is better than doing nothing.

Simplified.

We could go to bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but it's not a perfect option, because if we leave out a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.


We could go to bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but ithat's not a perfect opsolution, because if we leave outskip a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.

You could say "not a good option" or "not a perfect solution," but we generally do not say "perfect option." When you have a set routine but miss a part of it, we call it "skipping." John skipped school today. Normally I go to the gym every day, but I skipped it yesterday.

We could go to bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but i. However, that's not a perfect option, because if we leave outskip a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.

I split this sentence up because it was a 'run-on' sentence.

We could go tostay in bed and sleep all day without trying to do anything else to get better during these days, but it's not a perfect option, because if we leave out a day, it will be harder to start over tomorrow.do nothing. But then tomorrow will be harder.¶


Simplified

That's what streaks are about, right?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's what streaks are about, right?y learning every day is important

Simplified

On Duolingo and other platforms, or even here.


On Duolingo and, other platforms, or even here.

On Duolingo and other platforms, or even on here.

On Duolingo and other platforms, or even here.

Keep working on your dreams, whether it's small or big, and if you work hard and long enough, maybe you'll succeed.


Keep working on your dreams, whether it's small or bigthey are big or small, and if you work hard and long enough, maybe you'll succeed.

Dreams = plural This is arbitrary, but "big or small" is basically always in this order in English

Keep working on your dreams, whether it'sthey're small or big, and, if you work hard and long enough, maybe you'll succeed.

After all, rainy days doesn't last forever.


After all, rainy days doesn't last forever.

After all, rainy days doesn't last forever.

It may wash away our plans, but it also can be refreshing.


ItRain may wash away our plans, but it can also can be refreshing.

It may wash away our plans, but it also can be refreshing.They can slow us down for a while, but they can also give us a new start.¶

"Wash away " not everyone will understand this expression

Maybe that's why the next day feels so much better.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Day 5: When Rain Comes


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Day 5: When Rain Comes

This title is fine, but I think most native speakers would say "when the rain comes"

"When Rain Comes" This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking today's journey.


"When Rain Comes"


This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking
about today's journey.

"When Rrain Ccomes" ¶

." This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking about today's journey.

Since we're no longer in the title, no need to capitalize inside the quotes.

"When Rain Comes" ¶

This was the first thing that came to my mind when I started thinking today's journey.


Today, I thought about this sentence: "When rain comes."¶


When you make it simple even a layman can understand and it makes the reader to imagine the story line.

It can be interpreted in many ways.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It can be interpreted in many ways.has many meaning.¶

Make it simple and save time.

First of all, it rains for two days here.


First of all, it's been rainsing for two days here.

Your original sentence implies that where you live, when it rains it always rains for literally two exact days. From your post, it sounds like you are describing the current rain, which has been ongoing for two days. If that's the case, this edit is correct.

First of all, it has been rainsing for two days here.

If it's still raining, my correction above is right. If it has stopped, then 'it rained' is correct, instead.

First of all, it rains for two days here.

This bright and sunny city suddenly turned to a sad, wet, and relatively cold place.


This bright and sunny city suddenly turned into a sad, wet, and relatively cold place.

When something transforms into something else: x turns into y "Turn to" can be literal or figurative where the subject turns their direction: "Sarah turned to her left and saw the cat." "Sarah turned to a friend to ask for advice about her cat."

This bright and sunny city suddenly turned into a sad, wet, and relatively cold place.

This bright and sunny city suddenly turned to a sad, wet, and relatively cold place

The weather changed. It was sunny, but now it’s cold and wet
.

Simplified

The wind also brought out my migraine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The wind also brought out my migraine.gave me a strong headache.¶

Migraine is a medical term...a layman understands strong headache.

But this tiny sentence also has its own abstract meanings.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But this tiny sentence also has its own abstract meanings.means more than just the weather.¶

Simplified

I'm sure that everyone has their own rainy days, even if the sun is shining outside.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whether it's about everyday life, work or even learning a language, no one feels the same motivation every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whether it's about everyday life

Sometimes we feel tired, sad
, work or even learning a language, no one feels the same motivation every day. don’t feel like doing anything.¶
This can happen at work, at school, or when learning a language.¶

Simplified

Everyone has their own ways to get through these days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everyone has their own ways to get through thesefeel better during this days.

Layman understands

There are solutions, that work, and those that don't.


There are solutions, that work, and those that don't.

There are solutions, that work, and those that don't.

There are solutions, that work, and those thatSome things help, some don't.

Very clear and direct.

This is one of my rainy days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even writing a (probably wrong :D) sentence is really hard for me today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!



Even writing a (probably wrong :D) sentence is really hard for me today.this post is difficult.¶

It feels natural putting it this way.

No motivation, no inspiration, I just want to survive this day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

No motivation, no inspiration, I feel tired and don’t have energy or ideas.I just want to survive this day.

Simplified

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