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Jan. 12, 2023

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Day 5: Seasonal Words

How would you say summer without saying it directly? Well, for that you would need a seasonal word or kigo. In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems. So, for example, instead saying summer, you can say beach. Instead saying winter, you can say snow. There are thousands of this words. Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words. I love using them in my poetry. Where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however. Seasonal words change for every country and continent. So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all North America territory. I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how would I say winter whitout saying it directly? Of course I would say christmas carols!

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Day 5: Seasonal Words

How would you say summer without saying it directly?

Well, for that you would need a seasonal word or kigo.

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems.

So, for example, instead of saying summer, you can say beach.

初めて知りました。教えてくれてありがとうございました。

Instead of saying winter, you can say snow.

There are thousands of this wordwords like this.

Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words.

I love using them in my poetry.

Where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.

Seasonal words change for every country and continent.

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all of North America territory.

頭がいいですよ。

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself, how would I say winter whithout saying it directly?

Of course! I would say cChristmas carols!

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よく書けています!

Day 5: Seasonal Words

How would you say summer without saying it directly?

Well, for that particular purpose, you would need a seasonal word or kigo.

More sophisticated

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poemspoetry.

So, for example, instead of saying summer, you canould say beach.

It is a hypothetical clause, you must use could.

Instead of saying winter, you canould say snow.

There are thousands of thisese words.

Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words.

I love using them in mywhen I write poetry.

Either one works, this one is just more specific and is to my personal taste, especially when writing a formal, informative-style text.

Where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.

Seasonal words change for every country and continent.

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all of North America territory.

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how would I say winter whithout saying it directly?

Of course I would say christmas carols!

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Lovely work, and interesting read, I have learnt something lovely today.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 13, 2023

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Thank you so much for your corrections. I'm happy that you learnt something new with my writing : )

Well, for that you would need a "kigo" or seasonal word or kigo.

used quotation marks around kigo to keep consistency (you used quotation marks for "hanami" later in this entry)

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems.

took away the definition because it was already defined earlier

So, fFor example, instead of saying summer, you can say beach.

Instead of saying winter, you can say snow.

There are thousands of thisese words.

"words" is plural, therefore "these"

Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, which is a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words.

WHowever, where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.

"however" is usually used at the beginning of the sentence

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all North America territoryies.

all - plural

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how I would I say winter whithout saying it directly?.

Of course I would say cChristmas carols!

holiday - capitalize

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Great writing! Learned something new.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 13, 2023

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

Day 5: Seasonal Words

How would you say summer without saying it directly?

Well, for that you would need a seasonal word or kigo.

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems.

So, for example, instead saying summer, you can say beach.

Instead saying winter, you can say snow.

There are thousands of thisese words.

Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words.

I love using them in my poetry.

WHowever, where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.

Seasonal words change for every country and continent.

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all of North America territory.

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how would I say winter whitout saying it directly?

Of course I would say cChristmas carols!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 13, 2023

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Thank you!

Day 5: Seasonal Words


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How would you say summer without saying it directly?


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Well, for that you would need a seasonal word or kigo.


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Well, for that you would need a "kigo" or seasonal word or kigo.

used quotation marks around kigo to keep consistency (you used quotation marks for "hanami" later in this entry)

Well, for that particular purpose, you would need a seasonal word or kigo.

More sophisticated

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In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems.

took away the definition because it was already defined earlier

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poemspoetry.

In Japanese poetry kigo, or seasonal words, are used a lot to avoid repeating the words summer, spring, winter and autumn in all the poems.

So, for example, instead saying summer, you can say beach.


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So, fFor example, instead of saying summer, you can say beach.

So, for example, instead of saying summer, you canould say beach.

It is a hypothetical clause, you must use could.

So, for example, instead of saying summer, you can say beach.

初めて知りました。教えてくれてありがとうございました。

Instead saying winter, you can say snow.


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Instead of saying winter, you can say snow.

Instead of saying winter, you canould say snow.

Instead of saying winter, you can say snow.

There are thousands of this words.


There are thousands of thisese words.

There are thousands of thisese words.

"words" is plural, therefore "these"

There are thousands of thisese words.

There are thousands of this wordwords like this.

Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words.


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Japanese poets, especially haiku writers, usually carry with them a saijiki, which is a dictionary divided into all the seasons with thousands of seasonal words.

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I love using them in my poetry.


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I love using them in mywhen I write poetry.

Either one works, this one is just more specific and is to my personal taste, especially when writing a formal, informative-style text.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.


WHowever, where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.

WHowever, where I live there's no "hanami" or cherry blossoms, however.

"however" is usually used at the beginning of the sentence

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Seasonal words change for every country and continent.


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So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all North America territory.


So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all of North America territory.

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all North America territoryies.

all - plural

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all of North America territory.

So I decided to create my own saijiki, with seasonal words based on all of North America territory.

頭がいいですよ。

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how would I say winter whitout saying it directly?


I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how would I say winter whitout saying it directly?

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how I would I say winter whithout saying it directly?.

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself how would I say winter whithout saying it directly?

I'm still working on it, and it's fun to ask myself, how would I say winter whithout saying it directly?

Of course I would say christmas carols!


Of course I would say cChristmas carols!

Of course I would say cChristmas carols!

holiday - capitalize

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Of course! I would say cChristmas carols!

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