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As we all know, exericise during the daytime can improve sleep quality in the night. From my experience, cardio is more effective than resistance training when it comes to benefiting sleep. And whatever the kind of exercise one takes, being outdoors is always better than staying indoors. That's the reason I take a hour-long walk outside, for the sake of getting a good night's sleep, since poor sleep quality has troubled me for a long time.
However, resistance training can help people maintain a healthy amount of muscle, which is the foundation of good health.


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As we all know, exericise during the daytime can improve sleep quality in theat night.

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FromIn my experience, cardio is more effective than resistance training when it comes to sleep benefiting sleeps.

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And whatever the kind of exercise one takdoes, being outdoors is always better than staying indoors.

We wouldn't use "take" for "exercise"

That's the reason I take an hour-long walk outside, for the sake of getting a good night's sleep, since poor sleep quality has troubled me for a long time.

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As we all know, exericise during the daytime can improve sleep quality in the night.


As we all know, exericise during the daytime can improve sleep quality in theat night.

More natural

From my experience, cardio is more effective than resistance training when it comes to benefiting sleep.


FromIn my experience, cardio is more effective than resistance training when it comes to sleep benefiting sleeps.

More natural

And whatever the kind of exercise one takes, being outdoors is always better than staying indoors.


And whatever the kind of exercise one takdoes, being outdoors is always better than staying indoors.

We wouldn't use "take" for "exercise"

That's the reason I take a hour-long walk outside, for the sake of getting a good night's sleep, since poor sleep quality has troubled me for a long time.


That's the reason I take an hour-long walk outside, for the sake of getting a good night's sleep, since poor sleep quality has troubled me for a long time.

However, resistance training can help people maintain a healthy amount of muscle, which is the foundation of good health.


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