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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 26, 2023

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Day 49: Buddhism

I would like to learn more about buddhism. I think that I have always been connected on it since a long time ago. I started meditating before I knew about buddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka before I knew that they were influenced by buddhism since a long time ago. I think that buddhism could be my true religion, it's just a random thought.
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Day 49: Buddhism

I would like to learn more about bBuddhism.

I think that I have always been connected ton it sincefrom a long time ago.

I started meditating before I knew about bBuddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka before I knew that they were influenced by bBuddhism since a long time ago.

いいですね。

I think that bBuddhism could be my true religion, it'. This is just a random thought.

This sounds better as two sentences.

Thanks for reading.

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面白い話です。よく出来ました!

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 27, 2023

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Thank you!

Day 49: Buddhism

I would like to learn more about bBuddhism.

I think that I have always been connected ton it sincefor a long time ago.

I started meditating before I knew about bBuddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka before I knew that they were influenced by bBuddhism since a long time ago.

I think that bBuddhism could be my true religion, i. It's just a random thought.

Thanks for reading

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Good job! I'm not a religious person myself so I don't have much to say on this matter, other than deciding what your religion is is your own choice.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 27, 2023

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Thank you for the advice and your corrections, I really appreciate it!

I think that Ithere haves always been some connected on it since a long time agoion between buddhism and me.

The preposition after “connected” is “to”. Here it would seem more natural to say “there is some connection between”.

I started meditating before I knew about buddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka long before I knew that they were influenced by buddhism since a long time ago.

I think that buddhism could be my true religion, i. It's just a random thought.

Thanks for reading.

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Fernanhaiku

Feb. 27, 2023

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Thank you!!

Day 49: Buddhism


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I would like to learn more about buddhism.


I would like to learn more about bBuddhism.

I would like to learn more about bBuddhism.

I think that I have always been connected on it since a long time ago.


I think that Ithere haves always been some connected on it since a long time agoion between buddhism and me.

The preposition after “connected” is “to”. Here it would seem more natural to say “there is some connection between”.

I think that I have always been connected ton it sincefor a long time ago.

I think that I have always been connected ton it sincefrom a long time ago.

I started meditating before I knew about buddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka before I knew that they were influenced by buddhism since a long time ago.


I started meditating before I knew about buddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka long before I knew that they were influenced by buddhism since a long time ago.

I started meditating before I knew about bBuddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka before I knew that they were influenced by bBuddhism since a long time ago.

I started meditating before I knew about bBuddhism, and I started writing haiku and tanka before I knew that they were influenced by bBuddhism since a long time ago.

いいですね。

I think that buddhism could be my true religion, it's just a random thought.


I think that buddhism could be my true religion, i. It's just a random thought.

I think that bBuddhism could be my true religion, i. It's just a random thought.

I think that bBuddhism could be my true religion, it'. This is just a random thought.

This sounds better as two sentences.

Thanks for reading


Thanks for reading.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for reading.

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