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Day 48: Pinocchio

In my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro. I don't want to spoil you the movie, but in few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the dead of his son. The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that dead is something natural that make us real.
I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the dead is something natural and an essential part of live, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love.
"This movie was made out of Mexican wood" is a slogan that I heard in the trailer of the movie. This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about dead and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has. He also said that Animated movies is not just for kids, animation is art and animation is film. I hope it wins the best animated movie oscar.

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"This movie was made out of Mexican wood" is a slogan that I heard in the trailer of the movie.

I hope it wins the best animated movie oscar.

Day 48: Pinocchio

Day 48: Pinocchio

"This movie was made out of Mexican wood" is a slogan that I heard in the trailer of the movie.

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Feb. 26, 2023

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Day 48: Pinocchio

"This movie was made out of Mexican wood" is a slogan that I heard in the trailer of the movie.

I hope it wins the best animated movie oscar.

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Day 48: Pinocchio


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In my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro.


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IOn my birthday, I watched Pinocchio ofby Guillermo del Toro. On my birthday, I watched Pinocchio by Guillermo del Toro.

IOn my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro. On my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro.

IOn my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro. On my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro.

IOn my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro. On my birthday, I watched Pinocchio of Guillermo del Toro.

English is very confusing, even for some Americans, so it's hard for me to explain why, haha. When referring to a time of the year, holiday, etc, you use "on" or "during". (Extra information) If you're referring to a time of day, however, you use "at". For example, "I go to sleep at 9:30pm", or "The party was at noon". (Noon means 12:00pm!)

I don't want to spoil you the movie, but in few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the dead of his son.


I don't want to spoil you the movie for you, but in a few words, the movie is about an old man who struggles with the deadth of his son. I don't want to spoil the movie for you, but in a few words, the movie is about an old man who struggles with the death of his son.

I don't want to spoil you the movie for you, but in a few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the deadth of his son. I don't want to spoil the movie for you, but in a few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the death of his son.

I don't want to spoil you the movie for you, but in a few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the deadth of his son. I don't want to spoil the movie for you, but in a few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the death of his son.

I don't want to spoil you the movie, but in few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the deadth of his son. I don't want to spoil the movie, but in few words the movie is about an old man who struggles with the death of his son.

"Dead" is an adjective, or a word to describe someone or something. Death is an event (which is the best I can describe it). When saying you're spoiling a movie, book, etc for someone, there's no need to add the "you" since the context is assumed. Though, if you want to, you can put "I don't want to spoil the movie for you". Good job, though! The sentence is still easy to understand.

The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that dead is something natural that make us real.


The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are, and on accepting that deadth is something natural that makes us real. The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are, and accepting that death is something natural that makes us real.

The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that deadth is something natural that makes us real. The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that death is something natural that makes us real.

The movie puts an emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that deadth is something natural that make us real. The movie puts an emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that death is something natural that make us real.

The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that deadth is something natural that makes us real. The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and on accepting that death is something natural that makes us real.

The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves as we are and onfor who we are accepting that deadth is something natural that make us real. The movie puts emphasis on accepting ourselves for who we are accepting that death is something natural that make us real.

This is good! Though, I don't know what you meant by "real". Alive, maybe?

I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the dead is something natural and an essential part of live, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love.


I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the deadth is something natural and an essential part of livfe, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love. I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that death is something natural and an essential part of life, but we must keep following our path when life takes somebody we love.

I cried infor the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the deadth is something natural and an essential part of livfe, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love from us. I cried for the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that death is something natural and an essential part of life, but we must keep following our path when life takes somebody we love from us.

悲しそうです!

I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the deadth is something natural and an essential part of livfe, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love. I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that death is something natural and an essential part of life, but we must keep following our path when life takes from us somebody we love.

I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the deadth is something natural and an essential part of livfe, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love. I cried in the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that death is something natural and an essential part of life, but we must keep following our path when life takes from us somebody we love.

I cried during the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that the deadth is something natural and an essential part of livfe, but we must keep following our path when the life takes from us somebody we love. I cried during the last twenty minutes of the movie because the moral is that death is something natural and an essential part of life, but we must keep following our path when life takes somebody we love.

"During" means the action is happening while something is happening, if that makes sense!

"This movie was made out of Mexican wood" is a slogan that I heard in the trailer of the movie.


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This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about dead and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has.


This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexicans' perspective about deadth and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican, and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has. This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexicans' perspective about death and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican, and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has.

This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor iswas it situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about deadlife and lifedeath as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture into every project that he hamakes. This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor was it situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about life and death as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture into every project that he makes.

いいですね。

This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about deadth and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has. This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about death and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has.

This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is it situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about deadth and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has. This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is it situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about death and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has.

This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about deadth and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican, and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has. This movie doesn't talk about Mexico nor is situated in Mexico, but the whole movie was made from a Mexican perspective about death and life as Guillermo del Toro is proud of being Mexican, and he always wants to put a little bit of his culture in every project that he has.

He also said that Animated movies is not just for kids, animation is art and animation is film.


He also said that Aanimated movies isare not just for kids, animation is art and animation is film. He also said that animated movies are not just for kids, animation is art and animation is film.

He also said that Aanimated movies isare not just for kids, a. Animation is art and animation is film. He also said that animated movies are not just for kids. Animation is art and animation is film.

He also said that Aanimated movies is not just for kids,; animation is art and animation is film. He also said that animated movies is not just for kids; animation is art and animation is film.

He also said that Animated movies isare not just for kids, animation is art and animation is film. He also said that Animated movies are not just for kids, animation is art and animation is film.

He also said that Animated movies isare not just for kids, animation is art and animation is a film. He also said that Animated movies are not just for kids, animation is art and animation is a film.

"are" is used for something plural, meaning there's multiple!

I hope it wins the best animated movie oscar.


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I hope it wins the Oscar for best animated movie oscar. I hope it wins the Oscar for best animated movie.

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