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Day 47: Good Motives 2

I'm so thankful to all of you for all the advice that you've given me. I now know that having "looking good" as a motive for exercising isn't a bad thing. However, I have been thinking in another motives for exercising, I even made a list. So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.
I'm going to focus in building the habit in order to focus more in the process than in the result.
Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

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Day 47: Good Motives 2

I'm so thankful to all of you for all the advice that you've given me.

I now know that having "looking good" as a motive for exercising isn't a bad thing.

However, I have been thinking in anof other motives for exercising, I even made a list.

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

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Great job! It takes a lot of strength to have the motivation to exercise (at least for me, haha), so I'm proud!

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Day 47: Good Motives 2

I'm so thankful to all of you for all the advice that you've given me.

I now know that having "looking good" as a motive for exercising isn't a bad thing.

However, I have been thinking in anof other motives for exercising, I even made a list.

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline, and the third one is to have a good body.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

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Good job! It's always good to have more than one motive for something. I'd say you're on the right track. Good luck!

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Day 47: Good Motives 2

I'm so thankful to all of you for all the advice that you've given me.

I now know that having "looking good" as a motive for exercising isn't a bad thing.

However, I have been thinking inof another motives for exercising, I even made a list.

I know in Spanish the preposition ‘in’ is used (e.g. “pensando en ti”) however in English we use “de” = “of”!
“I’m thinking of taking a break.”

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

“Build discipline” is more sophisticated!

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

“This week I’ll be focusing on writing.” “Focus on her!”

“In” becomes redundant with “in the result” !

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

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Well done Fernan! That is a good mindset to have; we can’t always control what happens, but we can control what we do!

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Day 47: Good Motives 2

I'm so thankful to all of you for all the advice that you've given me.

I now know that having "looking good" as a motive for exercising isn't a bad thing.

However, I have been thinking in anabout other motives for exercising, and I even made a list.

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, and the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more in the process than ion the result.

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

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Day 47: Good Motives 2

I'm so thankful to all of you for all the advice that you've given me.

I now know that having "looking good" as a motive for exercising isn't a bad thing.

However, I have been thinking in an, however, about other motives for exercising, and I even made a list.

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

やった！\o/

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

oops, typo

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I love how you said that you're going to focus on the process more than the result. I recently started practicing piano again so this helps me! 本当にありがとう！上手に書けています！

Day 47: Good Motives 2

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However, I have been thinking in another motives for exercising, I even made a list.

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However, I have been thinking inof another motives for exercising, I even made a list.

I know in Spanish the preposition ‘in’ is used (e.g. “pensando en ti”) however in English we use “de” = “of”! “I’m thinking of taking a break.”

However, I have been thinking in anof other motives for exercising, I even made a list.

However, I have been thinking in anof other motives for exercising, I even made a list.

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

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So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, and the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline and the third one is to have a good body.

“Build discipline” is more sophisticated!

So my first motive for exercising is to become a stronger person, the second one is to build up my discipline, and the third one is to have a good body.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to focus in building the habit in order to focus more in the process than in the result.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

やった！\o/

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more in the process than ion the result.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

“This week I’ll be focusing on writing.” “Focus on her!” “In” becomes redundant with “in the result” !

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

I'm going to focus ion building the habit in order to focus more ion the process than in the result.

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

oops, typo

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

Thanks for reading and for all of your adivice!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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